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WHat emotions come when you read the two poems and what do you think this poem is about explain you answer...poem below

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message 1: by Fee♥ (last edited Jun 22, 2009 11:35AM) (new)

Fee♥ | 30 comments Mod
Poem called "NEVER"

When I said I love you
I meant it.
Never wanted to hurt you
when I said I hated you. I guess
it to late to
take it
back. Nothing
can be done
things were said that made me
sheded. You wiped my tears
away
I yelled "Get away".
You did
but
my
pride
wouldn't let me tell you to stay.
I never thought
I'll be seating at you death bed telling you "I'll you miss".

You just never...think.




Yesterday
he told me he loved me and I completed him.
Tomorrow I seat and think of
the people who trying to pull us away
it seem like where their
prey.
Tomorrow
I wonder will his feeling stay for another day.
I think about this every time he kisses me
and hold me.
And if his love do fades
I always have the memory when he told me I was his airway.

Tomorrow isn't always guarantee.
That why I stop my wondering and start making memories,
because maybe one day us would only be I,and I will have only memories because
death
itself
can't
take
the
memory
of
Yesterday
Both poems By Felicia(me)


This is what the poem NEVER is about it's talking about a couple so in love just had one fight and instead of saying sorry they held that grudge and one of the love one got hurt in now he is dying and they realize they was wasting there time arguing.


and yesterday well u can kinda guess what that's about


message 2: by Samary (new)

Samary | 5 comments well i think never is saying like ven if your friend is being reatarded or something NEVER like treat them mean cause then you'll feel guilty.

then Yesterday is saying that you never know if someones always telling you the truth or if their two faced.

btw those are REALLY good felicia! :D


message 3: by Rebecca (new)

Rebecca | 6 comments really good and its heartfelt luv it!!


message 4: by Fee♥ (new)

Fee♥ | 30 comments Mod
Rebecca wrote: "really good and its heartfelt luv it!!"

thanks


message 5: by Fee♥ (new)

Fee♥ | 30 comments Mod
Samary wrote: "well i think never is saying like ven if your friend is being reatarded or something NEVER like treat them mean cause then you'll feel guilty.

then Yesterday is saying that you never know if som..."
thanks




message 6: by Leannear24 (new)

Leannear24 wow they r realy good
ever thought of becoming a poet?


message 7: by Fee♥ (new)

Fee♥ | 30 comments Mod
Leanne wrote: "wow they r realy good
ever thought of becoming a poet?"


I love all kinds of writing but I like to write novels


message 8: by Leannear24 (new)

Leannear24 cool


message 9: by Fee♥ (new)

Fee♥ | 30 comments Mod
Rebecca wrote: "really good and its heartfelt luv it!!"

thanx


message 10: by Evee (new)

Evee It's really good, but it kind of ruins the effect when the wording is weird. Try to make it smoother.
Also the way the poems are being presented is distracting from the actual poem.
Other than that I loved both of the poems :)


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