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message 1: by Dani (new)

Dani O'Connor Hi, here's the makings of my first book... it's 23 chapters but feel free to only read the first few. I would love any feedback negative or otherwise :) Thanks https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...


message 2: by Wordy, Modérateur d'un. (new)

Wordy Nerd (wordynerd) | 1809 comments Mod
I'll read at least two chapters today and give you feedbacks.


message 3: by Dani (new)

Dani O'Connor oh thank you thats great xx


message 4: by Wordy, Modérateur d'un. (new)

Wordy Nerd (wordynerd) | 1809 comments Mod
Dani wrote: "oh thank you thats great xx"

Sorry, I meant to do yesterday but, I got kinda busy but, I just finished commenting on the first two chapters this morning.


message 5: by Dani (new)

Dani O'Connor no that's fantastic thank you so much for the feedback. I'm constantly re-reading chapter one, I think I need to relook at it. I love chapter two myself. I have chapters I'm like did I really write that? its quite good others im like mmm not sure but I find that with books anyway some chapters jump out and some are just for story progression :)


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