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message 1: by Killer Queen (new)

Killer Queen (evilbutterflies) Here are some poems I wrote:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

They are about the little things in life. (Hence the name of it.)


message 2: by Anuhea (new)

Anuhea (anuhearamsey) I love the I Am Proof one!


message 3: by Killer Queen (new)

Killer Queen (evilbutterflies) ty


message 4: by Tia Todd, If everyone loved and nobody lied... (new)

Tia Todd StJohn (firedancer) | 84 comments Mod
Thos e are good!


message 5: by ~♥Alyssa♥~ (new)

~♥Alyssa♥~ (lyssie123) | 38 comments I like the first one! But they're all super good.


message 6: by Killer Queen (new)

Killer Queen (evilbutterflies) i like the first one too. tis me fav. that's why i put it first


message 7: by A. (new)

A. (acharc) I like Imagination. ^__^


message 8: by Bianca (new)

Bianca (otakuninja) i need to make some. i like poetry !


message 9: by Anuhea (new)

Anuhea (anuhearamsey) Yeah, poetry is really good. I have some on my profile.


message 10: by A. (new)

A. (acharc) I second that! Poetry is very good!


message 11: by A. (new)

A. (acharc) Oh wait...I should say i thrid that. XD


message 12: by Killer Queen (new)

Killer Queen (evilbutterflies) *is bored and stuck*


message 13: by Anuhea (new)

Anuhea (anuhearamsey) Stuck in glue!?


message 14: by Killer Queen (new)

Killer Queen (evilbutterflies) no in my writings


message 15: by ~♥Alyssa♥~ (new)

~♥Alyssa♥~ (lyssie123) | 38 comments Absolutely no one has read my writing. Oh well, I only have one story anyway and I wrote it at like midnight ages ago and it's not very good.


message 16: by Killer Queen (new)

Killer Queen (evilbutterflies) LINK! I WANT THE LINK!


message 17: by ~♥Alyssa♥~ (new)

~♥Alyssa♥~ (lyssie123) | 38 comments What? Umm...Ok then. You might have to be my friend to see it, but I'll try:

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

It's kind of an inside joke with a friend of mine, and it's meant to be a bit sarcastic. If that doesn't work, the title is something like 'Savage Pleading Eyes.' (Couldn't think of a better one)


message 18: by Killer Queen (new)

Killer Queen (evilbutterflies) HORROR!? EEEEK!!


message 19: by ~♥Alyssa♥~ (new)

~♥Alyssa♥~ (lyssie123) | 38 comments You don't like horror? Don't worry, it's not really that scary. I'm not into scary movies and stuff, so I don't know how to write that genre. Plus it's not meant to be serious.


message 20: by Killer Queen (new)

Killer Queen (evilbutterflies) is it silly?


message 21: by ~♥Alyssa♥~ (new)

~♥Alyssa♥~ (lyssie123) | 38 comments Not silly, it's just...I don't know how to explain it. I first came up with the idea to just entertain a friend, like as a joke. It's about a 'were-rat', and it's like a scary story, but underlayed with sarcasm. Because the idea is so ridiculous. It's more suspense than horror, too.


message 22: by Killer Queen (new)

Killer Queen (evilbutterflies) wererats are awesome! lol


message 23: by ~♥Alyssa♥~ (new)

~♥Alyssa♥~ (lyssie123) | 38 comments Yeah, we joke that there's a wererat in the gym locker room cuz some guys saw a HUGE rat in a big tube like thing above the locker room.


message 24: by Killer Queen (new)

Killer Queen (evilbutterflies) ick


message 25: by ~♥Alyssa♥~ (new)

~♥Alyssa♥~ (lyssie123) | 38 comments Yeah...Actually, it turned out later to be a sock. But it really did look like a rat. It was so freaky.


message 26: by Killer Queen (new)

Killer Queen (evilbutterflies) lol


message 27: by ~♥Alyssa♥~ (new)

~♥Alyssa♥~ (lyssie123) | 38 comments Oh, I'm in a 'writing' mood, so I just posted three poems I wrote for school. The middle one is kind of long and boring, but I had to write a narrative, and that's the only story I could come up with. Anyway, if you want to look, here they are:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...


message 28: by ~♥Alyssa♥~ (new)

~♥Alyssa♥~ (lyssie123) | 38 comments Yay! Thanks for reading them. You're the first person, I think.


message 29: by Killer Queen (new)

Killer Queen (evilbutterflies) i still have to read the last one...


message 30: by ~♥Alyssa♥~ (new)

~♥Alyssa♥~ (lyssie123) | 38 comments Like I said, the middle one is llllooooooonnnggg. But the other two are fairly short.


message 31: by Killer Queen (new)

Killer Queen (evilbutterflies) yeah, but tis me fav


message 32: by ~♥Alyssa♥~ (new)

~♥Alyssa♥~ (lyssie123) | 38 comments The long one? Thanks!


message 33: by Killer Queen (new)

Killer Queen (evilbutterflies) yup. np^^


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