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Holt (tnkphk) Name: Jeremy
Age: Looks 18 is actually 400
Species: Demon
Appearance: he has very dark black hair and one blue and one green eye.


message 2: by Holt (new)

Holt (tnkphk) Jeremy appeared in the creature training class, and sat on his chair, which was made of shadows.


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Holt (tnkphk) Jeremy, as he sat, the room seemed to grow darker.


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Holt (tnkphk) Jeremy looked up when the teacher came in. He was carrying a huge box using his mind. "Jeremy Tan, please make the room lighter" the teacher ordered roughly. This was the worst teacher in the school. He acted like he could treat the students as slaves. Jeremy muttered something about the teacher that was rude, but he made the room brighter.


message 5: by Holt (new)

Holt (tnkphk) Jeremy saw a hole in the huge box and something growled in it. The teachrr calmly opened the box and a hellhound burst out.


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Holt (tnkphk) (( warning: my posts are pretty long ))


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Holt (tnkphk) Except Jeremy, who was used to them. Hell, he was a demon. He looked straight into the dog's eyes and it bounded at him.


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Holt (tnkphk) Then the hellhound stopped and turned towards Emma, then leaped at her. Before it could bite her, Jeremy had made a barrier, a shadow barrier, and it was between Emma and the beast.


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Holt (tnkphk) The teacher had gone out of the class and locked the door. The hellhound somehow destroyed the barrier but attacked Jeremy instead.


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Holt (tnkphk) Jeremy stared at the hellhound which was frozen.


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Holt (tnkphk) He dodged it.


message 12: by Holt (new)

Holt (tnkphk) ""Stop gasping and do something!" He yelled c


message 13: by Holt (new)

Holt (tnkphk) "Finally someone's being logical." Jeremy sighed


message 14: by Holt (new)

Holt (tnkphk) "Now to get the door open." Jeremy mused, then twirled his finger, the door breaking into dust.


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Holt (tnkphk) "I'm out of here." jeremy pushed past the teacher, scowling.


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Holt (tnkphk) The hellhound suddenly leaped up, now in skeleton form. Jeremy leaving cursed it.


message 17: by Holt (new)

Holt (tnkphk) Jeremy saw the chaos and raised an eyebrow. The teacher soon approached him and dragged him off, yelling at him the entire way.


message 18: by Holt (new)

Holt (tnkphk) Jeremy walked back easily not two seconds later, now he was dragging the teacher. The teacher was just holding on, but Jeremy was walking normally.


message 19: by Holt (new)

Holt (tnkphk) "Jeremy, I order you to stop!" The teacher was annoyed. "Okay." Jeremy shrugged and stopped, the teacher flying away all of a sudden.


message 20: by Holt (new)

Holt (tnkphk) "Detention for you!" Jeremy heard the teacher yell.


message 21: by Holt (new)

Holt (tnkphk) "Detention for you too!" The teacher yelled.


message 22: by Holt (new)

Holt (tnkphk) "What she said" Jeremy yelled from way far away.


message 23: by Holt (new)

Holt (tnkphk) Jeremy waled on then accidentaly bumped into a majour cyclops bully.


message 24: by Holt (new)

Holt (tnkphk) "Yeahyeah" Jeremy snorted, shoving thr bully aside.


message 25: by Holt (new)

Holt (tnkphk) "Are you serious?!" Jeremy disappeared and reappeared behind the bully and continued to walk off.

((Gotta go))


message 26: by Holt (new)

Holt (tnkphk) ((Back))

Jeremy sat on a rock, reading a hexing book.


message 27: by Holt (new)

Holt (tnkphk) Jeremy heard a growl and looked up. "It's you again." He vanished. The hellhound was back


message 28: by Holt (new)

Holt (tnkphk) The hellhound growled and pounced on something moving. Jeremy reappeared a few meters away.


message 29: by Holt (new)

Holt (tnkphk) "Well that's bad." He muttered


message 30: by Holt (new)

Holt (tnkphk) It froze then leaped at her.


message 31: by Holt (new)

Holt (tnkphk) Jeremy decided to use his demon powers and controlled a shadow to tackle the creature.


message 32: by Holt (new)

Holt (tnkphk) The hellhound finally died and he sat down.


message 33: by Holt (new)

Holt (tnkphk) Jeremy walked to the next lesson, Duelling


message 34: by Holt (new)

Holt (tnkphk) The teacher, a cruel faced man, walked in. "ALRIGHT NOW EVERYONE. I WANT YOU IN TEAMS OF FOUR. THEN FIGHT TO SURRENDER." He yelled loudly.


message 35: by Holt (new)

Holt (tnkphk) Jeremy, being a loner just sat down.


message 36: by Holt (new)

Holt (tnkphk) Jeremy joined a group of demons, and then they had to duel. "NOW YOU ANGELS HAVE TO DUEL YOUR OPPOSITES. MEANING DEMONS. AND YOU VAMPIRES, WEREWOLVES." The teacher screamed


message 37: by Holt (new)

Holt (tnkphk) Jeremy winced at the voice echoing in his head. When people yelled he had that headache.


message 38: by Holt (new)

Holt (tnkphk) "My freaking head." Jeremy cursed. An angel made the sound amplify and he groaned.


message 39: by Holt (new)

Holt (tnkphk) "Why am I always the last one?!" Jeremy muttered, then started to use up traps, and then Emma's friends were passed out on the ground.


message 40: by Holt (new)

Holt (tnkphk) "Do I have to do this?!" Jeremy groaned and then first set up a run around himself.


message 41: by Holt (new)

Holt (tnkphk) It bounced off the rune and Jeremy's eyes glowed black, and a shadow cage appeared, chaos filling it.


message 42: by Holt (new)

Holt (tnkphk) Jeremy made the whole class go dark and he disappeared.


message 43: by Holt (new)

Holt (tnkphk) He casted a hex on one of the protecting spells, destroying it.


message 44: by Holt (new)

Holt (tnkphk) He sent another one, which weakened another spell.


message 45: by Holt (new)

Holt (tnkphk) Jeremy became visible and walked up to her.


message 46: by Holt (new)

Holt (tnkphk) "Sorry." He whispered, then a huge column of black shadows crashed on her.


message 47: by Holt (new)

Holt (tnkphk) "ALRIGHT YOU ARE DISMISSED." the teacher yelled. He gathered all the unconscious students and sent them to his place. where he was an evil person. Jeremy felt suspicious but left anyway.


message 48: by Holt (new)

Holt (tnkphk) Then the teacher strapped all the students to the walls to check on their species and do tests on them. He actually worked for the government against supernaturals.


message 49: by Holt (new)

Holt (tnkphk) Jeremy bit his lip as he stared at the class door. He looked in using his mind and saw the scene but shook it off.


message 50: by Holt (new)

Holt (tnkphk) The teacher calmly ignored her and set up machines.

Jeremy could hear her, and finally and reluctantly walked through the door. He blinked at the scene and crossed his arms. "WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON HERE?!"


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