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message 1: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 29, 2013 08:07AM) (new)

Dina-I made a folder for you!

DEEP FEELINGS

Have you ever liked someone
But they don't seem to notice you
Have you ever felt like screaming
But you know nobody would hear you

Have you ever looked into their smile
And said a prayer
Have you ever looked in to their mind
And wondered if their thinking about you

Have you ever felt their warm hug
And in that moment felt like the most special person

Have ever saw them look at someone else
And the jealousy feeling smacks you in the face

Have you ever felt like you are not good enough
But you push yourself not to give up

Have you ever had a close friend that you can't live without
That it almost seems like fate is telling the you belong together

Have you ever held your feeling inside for so long
That you just burst out crying in tears Cause your scared that person
Won't feel the same way

Love is a prize it makes you feel wanted It comes and goes yet its a memory in your heart You have to pay the price cause it huts so much so If you choose to fall in love be ready for the hbest memories you will never forget and the tears that will fall from your face


message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

HER SMILE

My life would not be complete
without a best friend like you

There's comfort in your silent embrace,
And I listen carefully to what it offers.

I feel the joy in your laughter and trusting eyes

When sadness fills my heart with disappointment of having to move farther away

I know no matter what we will always be the best of friends


message 3: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 29, 2013 08:09AM) (new)

THE LITTLE THINGS THAT COUNT

Our friendship we have is so rare to find, we hate to see each other in a bind.

We make each other laugh so much we might have cried.
We worry when one is upset, We always find the right word to say with a little since of humor to brighten our dreadful day.
I've never met anyone
sweeter. Than this before Don't you forget about me .

As I move far away
Will you always keep in touch, You'll always be my best friend And more.


message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

I WANT A MAN WHO

I want a man will be exciting to be around. I want man who will make me jump for joy everytime I see him. I want a man who will make me smile everyday.

I want a man who will always make you laugh on my bad days. I want a man who will make time for me when I need a friend.

I want a man who sit and listen to my words when I'm hurt. I want a man who will not play games with my heart. I want a man who will always be true to me even in the hard times.

I want a man who will talk to me all night just to make me smile. I want a man who will be the one i can count on to be there for me no matter what.

I want a man who will be the one i can put my trust in. I want a man who will love me as one but also be a best friend who will never let me go.

I want a man who has fun and loving personality. I want a man who will lay with me with a smile and embracing me with hugs. I want a man who will be the one i can just hang out with. I want man who has a great since of humor. I want a man who says I'm his princess forever and always.


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