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message 1: by Josephine (new)

Josephine (josephine_stein) Anna is destined to save two worlds, our world and the one with elves and magic. But how can she possibly do that without knowing she's destined?
One day, het parents she and her little brother moved to another city for her father's job. She didn't liked it, the boring little city... Until strange things happened. She got kidnapped by an elf. She took her to her world and that's were the story starts.
Will Anna succeed in saving one world? Is she able to deciber the strange markings in the white book?


message 2: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) | 253 comments At one point she should try to reject destiny.


message 3: by Helix42 (new)

Helix42 | 55 comments Sounds interesting! Do you have a link?


message 4: by Olivia (new)

Olivia | 213 comments Love it.


message 5: by Josephine (new)

Josephine (josephine_stein) Olivia wrote: "Love it."
Are you kidding? I thought this wasn't good at all.


message 6: by Abi (new)

Abi (ablissa) | 8 comments Love the concept of a whole other world, but I think that the plot shouldn't move as smoothly as the description leads the reader to believe.


message 7: by Josephine (new)

Josephine (josephine_stein) Thanks for all your comments. I'm still re writing the story and I also have plans for volume two.


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