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message 1: by [deleted user] (new)

Hold on, I've gotta type mine up!!!!


message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

Is there a certain topic? or is it freestyle? (please be freestyle, please be freestyle)


message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

Oh.... *feels embarrassed* XD XP


message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

School makes me wanna gouge my eyeballs out
It makes me want to punch and scream and shout
It makes me wanna cry, and it makes me wanna die
School is like a prison, the classrooms like cells
Homework is like my own personal hell
Everybody in school are raging, homo fools
Which makes me want to hang myself and kick out my own stool
School is too long and I don’t belong
That is why I am writing this stupid ass song

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Me and my cousin wrote this together one day :)


message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

((sure thang))


message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

Ashleigh The Silver Book Caterpillar wrote: "Whoa! Thats GREAT!"

XD thanks, usually I wouldn't use swear words, but hey, they rhymed :P


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

True dat, I suppose I've succeeded my amount, however :P


message 8: by [deleted user] (new)

Haha :) we're like twins!


message 9: by Rose (new)

Rose | 43 comments Black Bird

as it comes towards me
it brings a companion along
as always it makes me numb
they always come together

sometimes i welcome them
others i don't, i run
sometimes i need them
others i don't, i run

yes they always come back
as if knowing
i have received full freedom again
so they return

every time this bird takes flight
theres two gun shots
n its broken again
waiting for another day,
another flight
until its mended again

so today they come,
and i welcome them,
pain and sorrow


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

When r we gonna see who won?


message 11: by Rose (new)

Rose | 43 comments I was waiting for that too


message 12: by [deleted user] (new)

Haha :) yeah, do u know when the due date is?


message 13: by Rose (new)

Rose | 43 comments No. Sorry.


message 14: by Rose (new)

Rose | 43 comments Ashleigh The Silver Book Caterpillar wrote: "Rose i like yours because it really makes you feel like you know what is going on where and stuff like that :)"

Thnx :) and dw about it..someone wins...someone looses. :)


message 15: by [deleted user] (new)

YAY!!!! I WON!!!! Wahoo :) I've never won a contest before... so.... wow! YAY!
I think i'll have to do the next poetry contest, too :P


message 16: by Juliana (new)

Juliana Rodriguez (simple_nerds) Not part of the contest, I just wanted to vent my feelings out...

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Love

A ember in my soul,
Yet I wait for you.
In the quiet stillness,
I long for your touch.
A breeze in the morning,
Could not compare to the ragged breathing of my soul.
Yet, what am I waiting for?
Who am I pleasing?
It is only you, that I long for,
Forever in the stillness,
Forever in the quiet,
In the hate,
In the unjust,
In the places where love is enough.
Ill still be here,
Waiting in the dark,
For someone to come,
And steal my heart.
For you have shown me,
That you dont care
And while I wait...
Love is still in the air.



message 17: by [deleted user] (new)

`·.¸¸.·´´¯`··._.·Fґєєdом Bёlїёvёґ`·.¸¸.·´´¯`··._.· wrote: "Not part of the contest, I just wanted to vent my feelings out...

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Love

A ember in my soul,
Yet I wait for you.
In the quiet stillness,
I long for your touch.
A breeze in ..."


Oh my gosh that's amazing!!!


message 18: by [deleted user] (new)

How do u write such amazing things? I suck at poetry!!


message 19: by [deleted user] (new)

I can make one if u'd like? I'm supposed to judge it anyway


message 20: by [deleted user] (new)

Anika wrote: "Anna wrote: "I can make one if u'd like? I'm supposed to judge it anyway"

that would be great! i have a new poem :)"


Alright :) i'll do it now


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