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Valinor


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Legolas, still mourning, carried his friend's two bodies to the Valar.


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As he rode, Madelaines body turned to ash, the ashes flying away.


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"MADELAINE!" He shouted.


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But it was to late. She was gone for good... Or so they thought.


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"NO!" He cried but forced himself to keep going.


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Madelaine the real Madelaine, appeared wearing the same clothes and backpack she wore the day she first appeared. "Where am I?" She muttered. She saw someone in horseback screaming. She ran to Legolas, and said, "What's the matter?"


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"You- you were dead- and Woodsong-" He hugged his friend's body to him.


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Madelaine was a bit startled. She had never met him before. "Woah. Um, I don't know who you are or this Woodsong, but I really was just trying to help." She said slowly as she softly pulled away.


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((he was hugging woodsong))

Legolas looked pained. "You what?"


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"I don't know who you are. I don't even know where I am! One minute in New Zealand, here the next..." Madelaine said looking around at the scenery.


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"My name is Legolas Greenleaf," he said slowly.


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"Wait, what?! You've got to be joking. I bet it's just you Blake, pulling another prank on me, isn't it? And we're 20 years old, Blake! Your supposed to be more mature than that." Madelaine said narrowing her eyes.

((Gtgt school. Bye))


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"Who the heck is Blake?" He asked.


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He kept on riding and brought Woodsong's body to the Valar.


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*A few days later*

Legolas, almost weeping with joy, was sitting next to Woodsong's revived form as he slept. He watched his friend carefully. The Valar had revived Woodsong and there was no mark of where he had plunged the dagger in his throat.


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Woodsong mumbled something in his sleep and quickly opened his eyes he looked at Legolas a smile playing on his lips.


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"Woodsong?" Legolas asked, smiling. "Woodsong! You're ALIVE!" He almost yelled.


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"Yes I'm alive, now is Madelaine?" Woodsong asked.


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"Yes, but she thinks my name is Blake and she doesn't remember any of us..." he said sadly.


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"Blake was her friend I think." Woodsong said and looked at him "how am I alive?"


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"I bought you to Valinor and the Valar resurrected you." He said with a smile.


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((Gtg))


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((ok))


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Madelaine was looking through a crack in the door. She walked in. "Um, hi. Blake for one isn't my friend, and two, The Valar would like to see you." Madelaine looked pale, almost as if she had just seen a ghost.


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"What happened to you?" Legolas said.


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"Nothing." Madelaine said, opening the door so Varda, the Queen of the Valar could walk in. Madelaine rushed into the hall, afraid. Varda smiled. "Hello Legolas and Woodsong."


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"Hello, you Majesty," Legolas said. "You wish to speak to me?"


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"Yes. Two things. I guess I should start with Woodsong. He will be healed in a few mear days, but for now he must rest. As for the girl..." Varda had a difficult look on her face. "The Madelaine you knew, ever since the beginning when you met in the Forest, was a clone to test you. The one outside is the real Madelaine, and she knows. I need you to take care of her. She's very afraid, Legolas, and she needs help. Also, she is sadly not Woodsong's sister. That was apart of the test." Varda said.


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"Oh my goodness." He shook his head. "Who was testing us?"


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"We were. I cannot tell you why, or what will be one of it." Varda said.


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Legolas narrowed his eyes. "Very well."


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"Please don't be angry. And do take care of her." Varda said before disappearing in a bright flash.


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((...))


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Legolas squinted and said, "Madelaine, you can come back."


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Woodsong glared at the queen with pure hate before she disappearing and laying back down and shutting his eyes.


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Legolas sighed and turned his attention back to Woodsong.


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"That wasn't right Legolas." Woodsong said.


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"No. No it wasn't." He agreed sadly.


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Madelaine was peaking in, still wearing the same clothes. She walked in slowly almost as if she was... Shy. Which was strange because the other Madelaine was almost never shy. "Yeah?" She said softly.


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Woodsong looked up at her with hate and lowered his head back down.


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Legolas' face stayed blank and said, "did you trick us?"


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"What? No! I-I don't know what's going on and-" Madelaine stopped seeing Woodsong glare at her. She bolted out the door running out of the palace to the grounds. She leaned against a stony wall of the castle, heaving a great sigh.


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Legolas gave a great sigh and looked down.


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"Good she's gone, as far as I'm concerned she's still dead." Woodsong hissed.


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Legolas sighed. "Don't say that."


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Madelaine walked back into the hallway looking for a cup. She found a goblet which was good enough. Shellacked into her room, which was across from Woodsong's and sat on the flor, legs crossed. She started the cup song.

"I got my ticket for the long way round
Two bottles of whiskey for the way
And I sure would like some sweet company
And I'm leaving tomorrow, what do you say

When I'm gone
When I'm gone
You're gonna miss me when I'm gone
You're gonna miss me by my hair
You're gonna miss me everywhere, oh
You're gonna miss me when I'm gone

When I'm gone
When I'm gone
You're gonna miss me when I'm gone
You're gonna miss me by my walk
You're gonna miss me talk, oh
You're gonna miss me when I'm gone

I got my ticket for the long way round
The one with the prettiest of views
It's got mountains
It's got rivers
It's got sights to give you shivers
But it sure would be prettier with you

When I'm gone
When I'm gone
You're gonna miss me when I'm gone
You're gonna miss me by my walk
You're gonna miss me by my talk, oh
You're gonna miss me when I'm gone

When I'm gone
When I'm gone
You're gonna miss me when I'm gone
You're gonna miss me by my hair
You're gonna miss me by my everywhere, oh
Oh you're sure gonna miss me when I'm gone

When I'm gone
When I'm gone
You're gonna miss me when I'm gone
You're gonna miss me by my walk
You're gonna miss me by my talk, oh
You're gonna miss me when I'm gone
..."


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"To me it's true." Woodsong said.


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Legolas nodded. "How are you feeling?"


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"Fine." He said hearing Madelaine and looking at the wall. "I'm leaving." He said simply.


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