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message 1: by Elizabeth *Book Lover*, Main Mod (new)

Elizabeth *Book Lover* | 1835 comments Mod
Here you can share your short stories/poems.


message 2: by John (new)

John *BookLover* | 1301 comments Doctor Who meets Percy Jackson

I was at camp halfblood and then things got weird. A police public call box appeared in camp boundaries. Only demigods can get through the barrier. A man wearing a fez and bowtie walked out. "Has anyone seen a farting fat person walk through here ". Nobody answered. "Ok is anyone willing to fight an alien with me ". Everyone stepped out of the way and standing there was me." What " I said. Everyone started pushing me towards him. He pulled me in and I said " Wow its bigger on the inside ". And he said " yeah yeah yeah I've heard it before come on we have an alien to catch ". He pressed some buttons and pulled a lever. We stepped out and we weren't at camp anymore. " What is your name " I said. " The doctor and it is an honor meeting you Percy Jackson ". " How do you know my name ". "Oh come on you have saved the world I have saved the world how would I not ". "Are you an alien ". "Yes ". "How did we travel from camp to here ". " The time vortex". "Wait this can travel through time too ". "Yes can we stop talking we have a farting fat person to catch". "Yes doctor". We ran towards a fat person and stayed around them until they farted. After 13 fat people we finally found him. The smitheen. Or was it stillbeen. Anyway we found him. We ran and tackled him. He jumped up and reached for his forehead he pulled and I realized there was a dipper. He unzipped it and pulled down his skin. A chubby green alien was standing right in front of me. I pulled out riptide and I uncappped it. "Its riptide " said the doctor " I've always wanted to see it in person ". I slashed at the monster. Instead of golden ichor green blood dripped out. The doctor pulled out something and pointed it at the alien and pressed a button and it exploded. "What was that " I said. "A sonic screwdriver its from 2 billion years in the future " he said. We walked in the magic box and we were back at camp. "Here" he said. And he tossed me his sonic screwdriver and disappeared.


message 3: by Elizabeth *Book Lover*, Main Mod (new)

Elizabeth *Book Lover* | 1835 comments Mod
Pretty good :) needs some editing though.


message 4: by John (new)

John *BookLover* | 1301 comments What should my next one be about


message 5: by John (new)

John *BookLover* | 1301 comments Like what


message 6: by Elizabeth *Book Lover*, Main Mod (new)

Elizabeth *Book Lover* | 1835 comments Mod
Whatever you want.


message 7: by John (new)

John *BookLover* | 1301 comments What needs editing in it


message 8: by Elizabeth *Book Lover*, Main Mod (new)

Elizabeth *Book Lover* | 1835 comments Mod
About the editing, the dialogue needs to be separate lines and letters need to be capitalized.


message 9: by John (new)

John *BookLover* | 1301 comments I know but it's just a short story I can fix it I know it wasn't capitalized at some parts but its just a story it's not like it will be published


message 10: by John (new)

John *BookLover* | 1301 comments Next who should meet who


message 11: by John (new)

John *BookLover* | 1301 comments I can't think of who


message 12: by Elizabeth *Book Lover*, Main Mod (new)

Elizabeth *Book Lover* | 1835 comments Mod
It's still good to edit it.

I like writing stories, I'm pretty good if you need any help.


message 13: by John (new)

John *BookLover* | 1301 comments Homer Simpson should meet someone


message 14: by John (new)

John *BookLover* | 1301 comments In my next story and thanks


message 15: by Elizabeth *Book Lover*, Main Mod (new)

Elizabeth *Book Lover* | 1835 comments Mod
Well, what movies/books/tv shows do you like?


message 16: by Elizabeth *Book Lover*, Main Mod (new)

Elizabeth *Book Lover* | 1835 comments Mod
You're welcome.


message 17: by John (new)

John *BookLover* | 1301 comments The Simpsons, how I met your mother, doctor who,


message 18: by Elizabeth *Book Lover*, Main Mod (new)

Elizabeth *Book Lover* | 1835 comments Mod
Think of someone from there, anyways I have to go. Bye!


message 19: by John (new)

John *BookLover* | 1301 comments Iron man, ghost rider


message 20: by John (new)

John *BookLover* | 1301 comments Bye


message 21: by Kerry (new)

Kerry | 684 comments Mod
Hi


message 22: by John (new)

John *BookLover* | 1301 comments Kerry scroll up and read my story


message 23: by Kerry (new)

Kerry | 684 comments Mod
Ok


message 24: by Kerry (new)

Kerry | 684 comments Mod
Interesting ;) fun to think about two different fictional characters meeting ;)


message 25: by John (new)

John *BookLover* | 1301 comments I'm writing a series where different characters from stuff meet each other that was the first one


message 26: by Kerry (new)

Kerry | 684 comments Mod
Cool!


message 27: by John (new)

John *BookLover* | 1301 comments I'm trying to think of a second one


message 28: by MJ (new)

MJ Woody (harpsickhord) Amy Pond and Annabeth? xD


message 29: by John (new)

John *BookLover* | 1301 comments Or Rory and Jason


message 30: by John (new)

John *BookLover* | 1301 comments See ya I'm going to eat dinner post when I get back


message 31: by MJ (new)

MJ Woody (harpsickhord) River Song and Dionysus? That would be seriously hilarious. xDDD


message 32: by MJ (new)

MJ Woody (harpsickhord) Bye!


message 33: by Elizabeth *Book Lover*, Main Mod (new)

Elizabeth *Book Lover* | 1835 comments Mod
@Mary Jane You like Percy Jackson? That's awesome!


message 34: by MJ (new)

MJ Woody (harpsickhord) Oh, yeah! :D


message 35: by John (new)

John *BookLover* | 1301 comments River and Chiron


message 36: by Elizabeth *Book Lover*, Main Mod (new)

Elizabeth *Book Lover* | 1835 comments Mod
Now THAT would be interesting.


message 37: by John (new)

John *BookLover* | 1301 comments Their baby would be weird


message 38: by Elizabeth *Book Lover*, Main Mod (new)

Elizabeth *Book Lover* | 1835 comments Mod
@Mary Jane how many books have you read?


message 39: by Elizabeth *Book Lover*, Main Mod (new)

Elizabeth *Book Lover* | 1835 comments Mod
I wasn't thinking of it like that but...them meeting would be interesting.


message 40: by John (new)

John *BookLover* | 1301 comments I know


message 41: by Elizabeth *Book Lover*, Main Mod (new)

Elizabeth *Book Lover* | 1835 comments Mod
I'm going to go watch the Family of Blood now, bye!


message 42: by John (new)

John *BookLover* | 1301 comments A dalek meets a Minotaur


message 43: by John (new)

John *BookLover* | 1301 comments Bye


message 44: by MJ (new)

MJ Woody (harpsickhord) Bye!


message 45: by John (new)

John *BookLover* | 1301 comments And guys if you need any help with the group or anything I will try my best to help


message 46: by MJ (new)

MJ Woody (harpsickhord) Okay. We know you're always there! ;)


message 47: by John (new)

John *BookLover* | 1301 comments You can trust me :D


message 48: by John (new)

John *BookLover* | 1301 comments If you like


message 49: by John (new)

John *BookLover* | 1301 comments Some people don't D:


message 50: by MJ (new)

MJ Woody (harpsickhord) That's stinks. :(


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