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Kate
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Aug 23, 2013 05:58AM
I'm going to post some stuff here, hopefully it will be exiting!
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So, this is a story I'm working on, about several 7th grade girls with magical powers. http://www.goodreads.com/story/chapte...
Does anyone think the plot is getting boring? Or am I doing an OK job.
You overuse a lot of words as well as reusing alot of the same plot detail. I'm not feeling a plot climax yet. I can feel the story moving forward though, which is good. I applaud the effort so far, keep chugging away.
Yeah, I use detail a little to much. Thanks, though! The climax is Close!!
