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message 1: by Kate (new)

Kate I'm going to post some stuff here, hopefully it will be exiting!


message 2: by Kate (new)

Kate So, this is a story I'm working on, about several 7th grade girls with magical powers.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/chapte...


message 3: by Fatima (new)

Fatima | 15 comments I like it


message 4: by Kate (new)

Kate Thanks!


message 5: by Kate (new)

Kate I updated.


message 6: by Kate (new)

Kate Does anyone think the plot is getting boring? Or am I doing an OK job.


message 7: by Zachary (new)

Zachary (zdcrosby) | 35 comments You overuse a lot of words as well as reusing alot of the same plot detail. I'm not feeling a plot climax yet. I can feel the story moving forward though, which is good. I applaud the effort so far, keep chugging away.


message 8: by Kate (new)

Kate Yeah, I use detail a little to much. Thanks, though! The climax is Close!!


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