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message 1: by Storm [Heaven Above You, There's Hell Over Me]], Samurai of the Shadows (new)

Storm [Heaven Above You, There's Hell Over Me]] (StormBloodBlade) | 224 comments Mod



message 2: by Miyuki, The Lonely Lady (new)

Miyuki (miyuki2) | 342 comments Mod
Miyuki leaned onto the bridge railing, peering out into the pond. She spotted a few koi fishes darting here and there. The private area was serene and quiet, contrast to the entrance area where everybody was busy socializing and getting food. Miyuki admired the changing colors of the tree from green to a orangeish red.


message 3: by Celia (new)

Celia | 109 comments Mika walked around the private area. She was all dolled up for the party, her hair in a loose half up-do (with a pink bow). She was wearing one of her better looking kimonos. She doesn't want to look shabby in front of the empress, especially since the empress doesn't really like her.

The trees were becoming a really pretty shade of red and she picked up a leaf that fell on the floor. She twist the stem between her fingers as she continue to explore the area. She soon spotted a small, girl with a long silver ponytail wearing a black and white kimono. She immediately recognized her as the empress's sister, as they both have similar hair.

She walked up to the girl, trying to recall the girl's name as she approached. "Uh..Miyuki, right?" she asked when she was a couple of feet away from the princess. She remembers Miyuki as a cheerful girl who's a bit talkative and likes to be in the center of attention. So why is the princess here all by herself? she wondered to herself.

((Is that good? x3))


message 4: by Miyuki, The Lonely Lady (new)

Miyuki (miyuki2) | 342 comments Mod
((You wrote more than me, whatcha talking about))

Miyuki heard a voice and jumped. She thought she was all alone. She looked up to see a girl about 5 feet 4 walking towards her. Ahh so pretty! she thought silently. The girl's long brown hair was loosely curled and it was tied into a half updo behind her back with a pretty pink bow. Her kimono is a pretty shade of pink and it trailed behind her; kind of like a wedding gown. The girl also wore a thin, translucent pink robe--decorated with pink flowers--over her kimono. Miyuki started to feel self conscious about her plain black and white one.

She nodded, "Yup, Miyuki's my name." Yuki looked closely at the girl's almond shaped face. She felt like as if she's seen the girl somewhere. She snapped her fingers, "Oh! You're Mika, right? My half sister." The other princess nodded, confirming her thoughts. "Wow! You look so pretty today!" she blurted out, not able to contain the thought anymore. Mika usually came off as more of a tomboy than a girly-girl. However today, she was sure to have suitors following her everywhere.

"What are you doing here? Why aren't you enjoying the party?" she asked out of curiosity. "Did Sora-nee kick you out or something?" Miyuki knew that Sora had a disliking to Mika, simply because she was one of the concubine's daughter.

((Mwahahah, trying to write more xD))


message 5: by Celia (new)

Celia | 109 comments ((x3))

Mika blushed at Miyuki's words, "You look gorgeous today as well, Miyuki-hime" she responded. Mika had always envied Miyuki's long, silver hair. She tried growing it out that long a few times, but her ends were always covered in split ends and it made her hair look unhealthy. She wondered how Miyuki could achieve such silky long hair without much split ends.

"I could ask you the same thing" she replied, "It's your sister's birthday party. What's the attention loving princess doing here all by herself" she teased. Mika didn't have the guts to greet the empress at the entrance area; although it was polite to do so. She'd seen the empress busy with the emperor and decided not to interrupt them unless she want Sora to embarrass her in front of her father and the rest of the court. So she snuck out here to the private area.

((wow, I got writer's block already >.<))


message 6: by Miyuki, The Lonely Lady (new)

Miyuki (miyuki2) | 342 comments Mod
((Lmao that happens to me so much. ACK last post before I log off))

Miyuki looked down at her plain black and white kimono with barely any design. "Meh" she said with a shrug as she decided to end the conversation about looks. She caught the older girl looking at the hair, "Is there some rice stuck on my hair or something?" she asked as she twist her head around the look at her hair.

She shrugged her shoulders again, "Ehh I don't know. I didn't know anybody at the party besides my family and my bodyguard." She looked around the place for Shou, "Who thankfully left me alone right now." She stared at the swimming fishes before she caught on Mika's teasing words, "And I do not love attention" she pouted. Okay, that was a lie. Miyuki does love getting attention.


message 7: by Celia (new)

Celia | 109 comments ((Nuuuuuu))

Mika quickly shook her head, "No, no!" she said in a rush. "It's just that your hair is so long, I was wondering how it doesn't have much split ends" she said. She turned to the pond and leaned over the railing. She dropped her red leaf into the pond and watched it as it floated away.

"Bodyguard?" she raised an eyebrow, "Is he here with us?" she asked, watching as Miyuki looked around for her personal guard. She relaxed when other princess denied him being with them. Mika never asked for guards, and always denied them when her mother asked if she wanted some. They followed you everywhere and gets annoying, because they always restrict you from doing the things you want to do.

Mika couldn't help but burst out laughing when the smaller girl said that she doesn't love attention and added in a pout. "Yup, you don't love attention and I'm a girly girl" Mika giggled playfully.


message 8: by Miyuki, The Lonely Lady (new)

Miyuki (miyuki2) | 342 comments Mod
((HEY MAMACITA, NAEGA AYAYAYAYA. Sorry got the song stuck in my head xD))

"I had it growing for a long time" she replied, "I get a trim twice a year to keep the split ends at bay." She stuck her tongue out at Mika, "Blah, stop being sarcastic, Mika!" she said pushing the older princess on the shoulder gently. "I wanna feed the fishes" she said, wanting to change the topic. "They seem so hungry" she peered down into the pond where all the fish gathered.

(AISH WRITING BLOCK HAD ME LIKE UGH))


message 9: by Celia (last edited Sep 01, 2014 05:09PM) (new)

Celia | 109 comments ((MAMACITA!! Haha, no worries. I have writer's block right now too x3))

"I could go fetch some fish food to feed the fishes if you would like" Mika suggested, still laughing from Miyuki's childish outburst. Before Miyuki could reply, Mika was already on her way to the entrance area to get some rice to feed the fishes.

((Ahhhh how should I kidnap you? (:< Just knock you out with a tree branch? x3))


message 10: by Avalon, Lady Errant (new)

Avalon | 482 comments Mod
(Erm, can Kazuko maybe come and try to save Miyuki? I'm a bit of a sadist when it comes to my characters so I was at least mildly hoping to injure her sometime during the party. =P)


message 11: by Miyuki, The Lonely Lady (new)

Miyuki (miyuki2) | 342 comments Mod
(( Haha xD sure))


message 12: by Celia (new)

Celia | 109 comments ((I'm not good with weapons and fighting though >.<))


message 13: by Avalon, Lady Errant (new)

Avalon | 482 comments Mod
(Alright, I'll go have her leave the Entrance Area then...)


message 14: by Miyuki, The Lonely Lady (new)

Miyuki (miyuki2) | 342 comments Mod
((@Celia, a tree branch?? o-o ohmy. I'll go get a pillow now..xD))


message 15: by Avalon, Lady Errant (new)

Avalon | 482 comments Mod
(Should we make some sort of posting order?)


message 16: by Miyuki, The Lonely Lady (new)

Miyuki (miyuki2) | 342 comments Mod
((Yeshh))


message 17: by Avalon, Lady Errant (last edited Sep 01, 2014 05:35PM) (new)

Avalon | 482 comments Mod
(Maybe you, then I'll come in, then Celia, and then we'll repeat that pattern?)


message 18: by Miyuki, The Lonely Lady (last edited Sep 01, 2014 07:06PM) (new)

Miyuki (miyuki2) | 342 comments Mod
Miyuki wanted to object, but Mika was already heading off. She leaned her elbows onto the curved wooden railing and watched as the koi darted through the clear water. She wondered when Mika will be back.

((From three paragraphs to three sentences xD oopsies!))


message 19: by Avalon, Lady Errant (new)

Avalon | 482 comments Mod
Avalon wrote: "(Maybe you, then I'll come in, then Celia, and then we'll repeat that pattern?)"

(So, yes to that then?)


message 20: by Miyuki, The Lonely Lady (new)

Miyuki (miyuki2) | 342 comments Mod
((Oh, yes!))


message 21: by Avalon, Lady Errant (new)

Avalon | 482 comments Mod
(Kk, give me a bit to post then =))


message 22: by Miyuki, The Lonely Lady (new)

Miyuki (miyuki2) | 342 comments Mod
((Okey!))


message 23: by Avalon, Lady Errant (new)

Avalon | 482 comments Mod
After leaving Sora and the emperor, it didn't take Kazuko long to find where Miyuki was hiding. All she had to do was head away from where the bulk of the guests and guards were until she found a scenic maple and bridge that were sure to attract the princess. "Miyuki! Honestly, weren't you warned that it's dangerous for you to wander about alone right now? Do you have any idea how worried your sister is?" Kazuko scolded. She didn't dare mention the attackers, nor did she announce that the party was coming to a close due to the emperor's orders. The way she saw it, that could be saved for when they were in a more secure location. For now, she merely scanned the area, attempting to discern if they were alone or if the shadows hid another enemy.


message 24: by Celia (new)

Celia | 109 comments ((Trying to think up of a name for the villain dude is so hard TT~TT. All of the names have such happy meanings.))

Katsu lingered behind one of the trees who's leaves were turning a bright orange color. He was close enough to the princess that he could see her, but she can't see him. He was wearing a guard's armor so even if someone spotted him, they would just assume that he was a soldier and not someone dangerous.

The girl in the pink kimono had finally left, leaving his target all alone. He was about to make his move but then another figure came in. He stepped closer, recognizing her as one of the empress's close friends. She was also a Daimyo. He mumbled a curse under his breath as his hand found the hilt of his katana. That black haired girl is probably going to bring his target to where her sister is and his opportunity will be over. It was now or never.

He emerged from his hiding spot, approaching the two girls. He bowed respectfully, "Princess, Daimyo. Do you need me to escort you back to the entrance area? I heard the Emperor had issued an order that the party was ending."

((My internet is being a pain the arse right now. Anyways, last post!))


message 25: by Celia (new)

Celia | 109 comments ((I think I spelled daimyo wrong TT~TT, argh))


message 26: by Avalon, Lady Errant (new)

Avalon | 482 comments Mod
(No, you were right)


message 27: by Miyuki, The Lonely Lady (new)

Miyuki (miyuki2) | 342 comments Mod
((Ayy that crying face looks familiar xp))

Miyuki looked up when she heard her name being called. At first she thought it was Mika, but then the voice sounded different. Her eyes focused on Kazuko, "Oh hi" she said, "I just wanted to be alone for a bit. I didn't know anybody at the party." She was about to leave with Kazuko when she heard someone else coming their way. She turned around to see a soldier coming towards them. "He is?" she said after hearing what the guard had to say. Miyuki looked over to Kazuko, she didn't tell her that. Was she hiding the information for some reason?


message 28: by Avalon, Lady Errant (new)

Avalon | 482 comments Mod
Rather than answer Miyuki's question, Kaszuko focused upon the guard. While she did not pretend to know the palace guards the way that she had memorized the faces of each of her own men, she found it suspicious that this one seemed completely stranger to her. As far as she knew, the emperor had not employed any new guards recently, and Kazuko visited enough to at least be somewhat familiar to all the guards. Even more suspicious was that he'd been hiding here rather than patrolling in plain sight.

"I apologize, but I don't believe we've met before. Are you a new guard?" Kazuko question, eyes narrowed. She had stepped in front of the princess protectively, ready to draw her weapon if need be. After all, for all she knew, he could be with the attackers she'd met earlier. If they managed to kill off one guard, they easily could have done so to another and stolen his uniform.


message 29: by Celia (new)

Celia | 109 comments ((It's cute ^.^ so I borrowed it))

"Somewhat new" he replied, slightly annoyed with the older girl. If she hadn't interfered, then the princess would be in his control at this point. "I usually patrol by the dungeons, so that's probably why we haven't met." If he wanted to take the princess now, he'd probably had to kill, or at least injure, the daimyo. His hand tightened around the hilt of his sword. "The name's Katsu, by the way. Perhaps next time when we meet, you'll remember me?" he said with an easy smile as he cautiously took one step closer.


message 30: by Avalon, Lady Errant (last edited Sep 02, 2014 09:39AM) (new)

Avalon | 482 comments Mod
(Celia: Um, this is really just a suggestion, since you said you're not really good with action, but feel free to do whatever: They could fight for like a couple posts and then he couple pull out a dagger and either end up grazing her with it, poisoning her, or just outright stabbing her with it, and in that case it could or couldn't be poisoned, and then he couple just grab Miyuki. Totally your call though, that's just what I imagine could happen... Of course, one way another, it's Miyuki's turn, but, yeah...)


message 31: by Miyuki, The Lonely Lady (new)

Miyuki (miyuki2) | 342 comments Mod
When Kazuko stepped in front on her, the guard was blocked from her view. Instead of trying to peer over Kazuko's shoulder, Miyuki just peeked out from her side. "What's wrong, Kazuko?" she asked as she looked at the soldier standing in front of them. Kazuko seemed to find him suspicious, but Miyuki didn't find anything wrong with him. He seemed like a regular guard to her. "My name's Miyuki!" she said from behind Kazuko's back, wanting their attention.


message 32: by Celia (new)

Celia | 109 comments Avalon wrote: "(Celia: Um, this is really just a suggestion, since you said you're not really good with action, but feel free to do whatever: They could fight for like a couple posts and then he couple pull out a..."

((I like your idea! :D ))


message 33: by Avalon, Lady Errant (new)

Avalon | 482 comments Mod
Celia wrote: "Avalon wrote: "(Celia: Um, this is really just a suggestion, since you said you're not really good with action, but feel free to do whatever: They could fight for like a couple posts and then he co..."

(Cool, lets go with that then =))


message 34: by Avalon, Lady Errant (new)

Avalon | 482 comments Mod
Still more or less ignore Miyuki, Kazuko unsheathed her blade. She hadn't liked this man the moment he announced his presence, and the way this conversation was going, her opinion of him was only plummeting. "Perhaps, but for now, I shall be taking Miyuki back to her sister. On my own, if you don't mind," she emphasized. If this was merely another guard, she would apologize later, but, for now, it was better to stay safe than sorry. Anyways, with his suspicious behaivour, Kazuko was almost willing to bet her father's sword that this man was not who he claimed.


message 35: by Celia (new)

Celia | 109 comments ((Miyuki's so cute ahaha x3))

"Ah, that won't do" he said flickering his gaze to her weapon. "Was my acting really that bad?" he asked, as he drew his katana. "I'm sorry-" well he wasn't actually really sorry, "but I'm afraid I need to take the princess. If you could just step aside, then nobody will get hurt." He wasn't really in the mood to hurt somebody but if have to, he will.

((Why is he kidnapping her btw?))


message 36: by Avalon, Lady Errant (new)

Avalon | 482 comments Mod
(Erm, meow, since there's now a villain creation thread, if you want to make Natsu into an official character you can...)


message 37: by Celia (new)

Celia | 109 comments ((It's Katsu x3 and nah. I'm still not sure about what his personality is going to be like :3 ))


message 38: by Avalon, Lady Errant (new)

Avalon | 482 comments Mod
(I could've sworn that's what I typed, but evidently not... And kk, you're choice.)


message 39: by Miyuki, The Lonely Lady (new)

Miyuki (miyuki2) | 342 comments Mod
(aIYA SO SORRY ><))

Miyuki grabbed onto Kazuko's sleeves tightly, she know she should be scared. Afterall, he was here to kidnap her. But with Kazuko she feels safe, she knows how strong her sister's childhood friend is and she knows that Kazuko will protect her.


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