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Md. Zakir Hossain Dakua (zakirdaq) | 4 comments Hi, you can use the blog http://goodreadsbangladesh.wordpress....

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message 2: by Aumee (last edited Jan 22, 2008 07:17AM) (new)

Aumee | 39 comments hmm
thanks ajanta
alright, i'm posting one of my poems below.
check it out guys.

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Aumee | 39 comments
By: Aumee Ahmed

As I sat quietly on the pier-
A beautiful breeze rippled the water face.
Warm and pleasent was the atmosphere,
Where I felt so quaint and out of place.
I felt marooned; stranded here:
With a harsh, cold world to face.
As warm air carelessly brushed my skin;
A lonesome gust chilled me from within.

It wasn't long ago, that you came;
Came like the wind, and blew my world away.
I had my life planned and set in frame-
Designed every whit for work: no play.
Then, there you were; wild and game;
Eager to show me the light of a new day.
Through you I learned to be-
To open my eyes and truely see.

The midsummer nights were enigmatic!
The autumn evenings enflamed;
Everything was blissful-so romantic!
Who'd have thought I'd be left so maimed?
You left so suddenly and so quick;
When by Him you were claimed.
Though in my life, you were evenescent,
There's not a moment with you that I repent.

So, by this lake I remain:
Broken-hearted and spiritless.
Fighting hard to overcome ths pain;
To clean up this life which lay a'mess.
The limits of endurance I must strain,
If I am to retreive life and happiness.
I pray you rest in peace,whilst in me,
Your memories thrive for all eternity.

message 4: by Russell (new)

Russell John (russelljohn) | 40 comments Mod
Fatafati hoise Aumee apu! Can I steal it for my blog?

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Russell John (russelljohn) | 40 comments Mod
It's your turn Ajanta apu... post your masterpiece :)

message 6: by Aumee (new)

Aumee | 39 comments Thanks guys
hehe........the initial drafts of 90% of everything i've ever written is in ajanta's note copies....if i ever get rich on writing.....aji could sell those on ebay and make a bundle....hehe.......but that's big IF.
and Ajanta is a big fat liar......o onek joss joss golpo likhe, unlike me she actually finishes them.........i love her scenes......especially the one with...."cool dudes"......hehehe

message 7: by Aumee (new)

Aumee | 39 comments i know..i know....but it was still hilarious!!!LOL!!!
and fyi depression is a great muse....she happens to be my favorite...i write my best stuff when i'm depressed....
you should give it a try

message 8: by Aumee (new)

Aumee | 39 comments Very insightful....truely.
i likes how you potrayed how it can 'make' a person....i mean is it truely making or breaking?????
it's like standing on a really thin line. you think ur in the middle...but ur not...the feeling is a cocktail of both.
see, i told you Depression is a nice lady :)

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Russell John (russelljohn) | 40 comments Mod
Ah, that was very touchy, Ajanta apu... recently I was so depressed that I thought of killing myself...

Anyway, I'm glad I didn't do anything stupid :)

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Russell John (russelljohn) | 40 comments Mod
That was a complement of coarse! Both of you're very talented (I'm jealous)!

I don't write poems or stories... the only poem that I wrote was when I was on the sixth grade, our geography teacher liked it so much that she hung it on the wall... but my classmates laughed at it... they thought it was dumb. So I never attempted to write a poem again.

Sorry I couldn't post anything... other members of the group, please share your pieces. :)

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Russell John (russelljohn) | 40 comments Mod
Kothin hoise!!! I wish I could write like you!

10 out of 10 dilam :)

message 12: by Shaker (new)

Shaker Muhammad | 21 comments It's a nice poem i think. I myself was lost to my inner most thoughts while reading this poem. I appreciate your writing.

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Aumee | 39 comments i'm jealous.....hehe
seriously though, joss hoise.....hay.......amar kobe je likhar mood ashbe.....:((

message 14: by Aumee (new)

Aumee | 39 comments not word...words
add the 's'

message 15: by Sababa (new)

Sababa | 2 comments whoa that was really expressive. i loved it!!

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