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message 1: by Sevania (last edited Apr 29, 2013 02:29PM) (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments So, basically, a huge meteor is scheduled to crash into Earth in a couple of months and obliterate the human species. Shari has learned to not trust anyone. I don't know how to write this summary so you guys should just go read it. Yeah.

I'm actually pretty happy with this one so far.

message 2: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments Just want to say that I've been working a lot on this one recently and I really hope people will give it a read :)

message 3: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments I've finished chapter four and have started chapter five!

message 4: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments Finished chapter six. Or at least part of it. No this didn't take forever and a day what are you talking about.

message 5: by Alina (new)

Alina (alinapink-rose) | 331 comments I still say this is an excellent story! It is a good cliffhanger! It has nice build and structure. Only thing that I suggest is that you give some character describtion. I have no idea what Erica looks like, or really any of the other characters. Other than that, doing good!

Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~ | 3061 comments **going well.
sorry. pet peeve. :P

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