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Any advise for a first-time author?
Teresa Robison Teresa Mar 17, 2013 09:57AM
If you have read my book, please feel free to comment. Thanks in advance.

B. Jun 29, 2014 03:33PM   -1 votes
Bravo on completing your first book! I enjoyed reading this book as it had multiple levels of complexity and a great unpredictable storyline. The main reason I couldn't give more stars is because the dialogue and speaking styles among both the black and white characters, at times, seemed unauthentic and forced. At times, I was certain that a slave would not have that manner of speaking. Additionally, it was hard for me to believe that young Marianne, all though a privileged white girl of society, would have such an adult manner of speaking.

All and all a good read!

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