Brandi's Writing

[Brandi]

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

[Ingrid, Just another writer.]

Hi Brandi. I'm the head mod, and I noticed your url for your story. I love to read stories and since I have the time, I'll definitely take the initiation and read yours for critique. How long have you written work? What's your recent work so far?

Hope we can get along well
Your eccentric moderator(and companion)

[Ingrid, Just another writer.]

I commented on your page in the link

[Brandi]

Brandi wrote: "http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3..."

I have been writing for 7 years. That's how long I have been working on the story I posted. I just cant seem to finish because something about just doesn't feel right been looking for someone to help me figure that out. Your feedback is going to help me because I think you have figured out what didn't feel right about it. My most recent work is a second story I have been working on. Same characters which is bad I know but I decided to take a different approach with them but then I got stuck and want to go back to change. http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

By the way I only posted the first two chapters of each book but there are more if you really enjoy them I will post more.

[Ingrid, Just another writer.]

Ok. and glad i could help

[Ingrid, Just another writer.]

Id luv it if youd post more.

[Brandi]

I'll put up another chapter now