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message 1: by Tia (new)

Tia Hanley (TeeyaahD) | 18 comments Dear Brother

How is this
the way it is?
I'm confused
and crying,
yet some how
you're amused,
we were strong,
a bond so tough,
now I'm worn,
I can't do this anymore,
I've sworn
i wouldnt feel that again.
To have you
and lose you
is the worst of all;
they say its better to have loved and lost
then never to have loved at all,
but how is that right?
now i hurt.
now i mourn.
the crazy thing is you're not even gone,
you're just absent,
a mist,
you coat everything
and flit in and out.
Never consistent,
but ever persistant
with your requests and demands.
Whats the ransom this time?
What more do you want from me?
what more can you take?
we gave you everything,
what do we get in return?
a branding iron burn.
excuse upon excuse,
lie upon lie.
Worst one of all:
"i swear,
I'll change this time!"
more fool me for beliving you,
no trace left of the person i knew.
LOOK AT ME!?
do you recognise this girl?
NO!
Because i'm not that girl
you used to know.
I've changed,
you missed it...
Because of what?!
your selfish need?
pathological greed?

nothings ever enough,
is it?!
I've seen my world change
and I've changed with it.
forgive my callous ways
but i'm not the same,
i'm lost.
you'll never find
the girl you left behind.
She's gone.
scattered
Now i'm cleaning the ash
and moving on
-Tia :)


message 2: by Tia (new)

Tia Hanley (TeeyaahD) | 18 comments Thanks :D yours are totes amazeballs for lack of a better phrase :D


message 3: by Tia (new)

Tia Hanley (TeeyaahD) | 18 comments nah you're really good! hahaha thats why i write poetry too helps me through it if i can turn my feelings into something beautiful :)


message 4: by Tia (new)

Tia Hanley (TeeyaahD) | 18 comments Its alright :P


message 5: by Tia (new)

Tia Hanley (TeeyaahD) | 18 comments In the mirror

It's nice to see you again.
If only for a moment.
you're here,
im here,
We know.
Before you flit away,
leaving me alone,
Stay.
Don't go.
I'll keep you safe,
please be the you I know you can be,
so please,
stay here with me?
will you make it ok?
If i cry, will you hold me?
If i'm silent will you hear me?
Can I...
you're gonr.
The world is dark,
my world feels cold.
you're here.
But you're gone.
A whisper,
A long gone echoe of a whisper.
Beneth your inpenetrable shell,
your soul lays bare.
-Tia :)


message 6: by Tia (new)

Tia Hanley (TeeyaahD) | 18 comments The mask

It slipped and fell,
on the way down
it crashed and burned.
Set fire to the fuse,
Watch it burst.
The shell shatters.

I'm falling,
into the deep.
Cry out for help.
Help.
I'm Drowning, Suffocating.
My hear is bleeding.
I'm aching, Shaking.
my mind is failing.
I'm done.
It's done.
I cave.
No flare.
No SOS,
It's too late for that.
More down than up,
No ReLife.
I breath but am dead,
I shake but am still
of mind, of heart
lest not of pain.
It Grips me,
Tight.
Holds me,
Fast.
Unmoving, Relentless
With a murderous streak.
I fight but like quicksand
I continue to sink.
I cling the only thing i know.
But to what lengths will it cling to me?,
before it's hold loosens
and i slip through the gentle grasp.

It slipped and fell,
On the way down it crashed and burned.
From the remnents I weave it anew.
Pin it to the place it will float.
Straighten it, untill all is concealed,
Raise and grit,
vacant of colour and life.
Did anyone see it fall?
-Tia :)


message 7: by Tia (new)

Tia Hanley (TeeyaahD) | 18 comments I'm serious you're talented! brought a tear to my eye :')


message 8: by Tia (new)

Tia Hanley (TeeyaahD) | 18 comments wow is all i can say *_*


message 9: by Tia (new)

Tia Hanley (TeeyaahD) | 18 comments aww i was reading and thinking the girl in it sounds like a shlaag XP


message 10: by Nitzan (new)

Nitzan Schwarz (nitzanafterwords) I'll love it if you guys check out my poems on my blog:
http://drugscalledwords.blogspot.co.il/

:)


message 11: by Nitzan (new)

Nitzan Schwarz (nitzanafterwords) Mal! You're pretty darn good! Damn!


❄️ Propertea Of Frostea ❄️ Bitter SnoBerry ❄ (berrynumey) | 406 comments ❅Snowflakes❄



Falling from above...
Cool in feel...
Frozen and shaped...
One of a kind...
Bound by friendship,
No big deal..?
We're snowflakes!
Unique in our ways,
Crafted with care,
Made from the same stuff,
Created by Almighty...
One named Flower,
The other a Gift,
One likes the sky blue,
The other purple at dusk,
Luxury for these snowflakes...
Lies in cats and chocolate!
Those snowflakes are us.
Gul and Tohfa.
We live miles apart,
Yet reside in the other's heart..
One day we'll be together,
One day the clouds will drop..
These snowflakes in unison forever...
One day. One peaceful time...
Till then goes this rhyme,
Telling a tale of snowflakes...
Of book explorers...
Of Rose and of Numey...




❄️ Propertea Of Frostea ❄️ Bitter SnoBerry ❄ (berrynumey) | 406 comments Thank you Mal! Your writing is pretty sweet too! =)


❄️ Propertea Of Frostea ❄️ Bitter SnoBerry ❄ (berrynumey) | 406 comments Me too :) Yups, Rose also known as the RANDOMANATOR here XD


❄️ Propertea Of Frostea ❄️ Bitter SnoBerry ❄ (berrynumey) | 406 comments Lol sure =) <3


Forgotten

Why do we forget our first spoken words,
But not our first known verse?
Why not forget our bad, unhappy moments,
And relish on ones that had happy comments..

"Forgive and Forget" those who hurt us?!
Yet forget to thank the helping ones!?
Forgotten the voice of your dead granny,
Or even the name of your first nanny...

We've forgotten our very first fall,
But still do remember our pet pal...
Why does a human brain have to-
Be so disorganized??
That it keeps what it wants and disposes
Stuff that want to be revised...

Forget all things bad, how do we?
Get new ones maybe...
That shall do, but yet,
We do tend to forget
Loved ones that once we let,
Now are hard to just get...

A lot we have in our head,
But things of heart are not yet dead,
They have done none but just fled,
Out of us, forgotten, just been bled...



message 16: by ❄️ Propertea Of Frostea ❄️ Bitter SnoBerry ❄ (last edited Mar 10, 2013 12:06PM) (new)

❄️ Propertea Of Frostea ❄️ Bitter SnoBerry ❄ (berrynumey) | 406 comments One more:








Dare, To Dream


Destiny, in the process
For life, fun, success
Must is to excel in excess
Dreams to come true
Heartfelt is the desire of only you
Can soar the free skies too
With the aspiring souls
That have daring goals
Dreams and wishes in their mind holes
Life as if you're oblivious
To death, ignorance hence obvious
But daring to dream, I am dubious

I may be a coward
Fear houses my dear dare
It's from the in-ward
I'm too afraid to care
I wish to fly with the bird
Reach high in the air
But I don't dare; to dream, the word
It's too passionate to bear
I've learnt the way hard
That life's not so fair
I know that I shall never let down my guard
I feel I'd be a tiny hare

But no matter what I do
There's light in what I can do
There's hope, there's faith, there lies destiny
Dreaming the possibilities, rebel and the mutiny
Living in sleep, seeking the world
Dreaming of changing your wakeful world
Believing in You, being true to You
Doing the dare, daring the clue
Finding the truth, seeking the treasure
Exploring the dreams, riding in the fissure
Achieving the non-triumphed target
The desire; blazing fire, too hot to get

Too vicious us to tame, the flame
The locks and keys, all the game
Hiding from what is for us is not easy
Accepting it, is not so pleas'
Never alone, never just one
But when you're at the top, just one
Dare to dream, it's what some dare to feel
Dare, cause your lord is with you
Dare, cause you have faith when you kneel
Dare, dare to dream, it's about you.



❄️ Propertea Of Frostea ❄️ Bitter SnoBerry ❄ (berrynumey) | 406 comments Another one:





You Are Not Alone

You Are Not Alone
Unspoken words,
Untold secrets,
Unseen truth,
Unintended lies,
All hidden
Deep inside
Deeper in us
Than the life of the world
You are not alone with yourself
You have an ally
You have your Lord
Your Creator
Your dear God
You’re never alone; You talk twice
Once in your self, Once out loud
Twice hears the Lord
Once the hearing ears here
All with almighty,
You share your time brightly
You. Are. Not. Alone.



❄️ Propertea Of Frostea ❄️ Bitter SnoBerry ❄ (berrynumey) | 406 comments Thank you Mal!! :D It comes with practice I guess XD


❄️ Propertea Of Frostea ❄️ Bitter SnoBerry ❄ (berrynumey) | 406 comments I dunno...poetry kinda runs in my family...just one in each generation XD I just began writing poems more last year =)

Here is one poem explaining that:

♦Poetic Kin♦

Decades ago was he...
Here, in light of thee,
To this world. A poetic head,
In Farsi, Urdu 'n' Persian,
His pen bled...

Following next was an angel..
Poems she wrote, that ring a bell,
Was an ace, but didn't tell
Wrote for self;
Not heaven nor hell.

Now here is a word freak,
Writes on stuff, pencils creek..
Imagination, ideas, all from heart leak.
Loves the cold air.,
Sadness of seasons bleak...



message 20: by ❄️ Propertea Of Frostea ❄️ Bitter SnoBerry ❄ (last edited Mar 10, 2013 12:19PM) (new)

❄️ Propertea Of Frostea ❄️ Bitter SnoBerry ❄ (berrynumey) | 406 comments #1 is my grandpa :)
#2 is Jij, my mom =D
and silly #3 is me ;b


❄️ Propertea Of Frostea ❄️ Bitter SnoBerry ❄ (berrynumey) | 406 comments Lol :D Does anyone in your family write? =)


❄️ Propertea Of Frostea ❄️ Bitter SnoBerry ❄ (berrynumey) | 406 comments Lol, Jij read a few to me...what she writes are more of a diary :) So she likes keeping them private too :)

Last year I wrote loads, about 100 and more...this year, I wrote just 5 :/

You? =)


❄️ Propertea Of Frostea ❄️ Bitter SnoBerry ❄ (berrynumey) | 406 comments Cool!

Hey I have to sleep now, bye! A good day to you! Nice talking (:


message 25: by Tia (new)

Tia Hanley (TeeyaahD) | 18 comments Wowzas how is everyone on this thread so talented O_o XD


message 26: by Tia (new)

Tia Hanley (TeeyaahD) | 18 comments Well thank you, ever so kind


❄️ Propertea Of Frostea ❄️ Bitter SnoBerry ❄ (berrynumey) | 406 comments "For as I get closer,

My mind a disposer.."


Love these lines! =)


message 28: by [deleted user] (new)

Mᴀʟ {18 Dᴀʏs Tɪʟʟ Lᴏᴠᴇʀ Aᴛ Lᴀsᴛ} wrote: "Forgotten


In the back of mind,

Maybe I’ll find,

Something I lost,

I miss it the most,

It’s somewhere back there,

A dangerous dare,

I’ve blocked out my head,

Fills me with dread,

For as I..."


wow, ue poems are amazing.


message 29: by [deleted user] (new)

Worries

He never would
Never will

I shouldn't worry
Yet I do

What if this
What if that

Prettier girls
Girls closer to him

Long distance
And a girls mind

So many worries
So many fears

He never would
Never will

I shouldn't worry
Yet I do


message 30: by Nitzan (new)

Nitzan Schwarz (nitzanafterwords) Mᴀʟ {18 Dᴀʏs Tɪʟʟ Lᴏᴠᴇʀ Aᴛ Lᴀsᴛ} wrote: "Nitzan wrote: "Mal! You're pretty darn good! Damn!"

I really like your poems- especially the Finish Line and Where Is My Glue? // Drowning"


Thank you so much!


message 31: by [deleted user] (new)

Mᴀʟ {11 Dᴀʏs Tɪʟʟ Lᴏᴠᴇʀ Aᴛ Lᴀsᴛ} wrote: "₵î௹៛ ❤forever❤ wrote: "Mᴀʟ {18 Dᴀʏs Tɪʟʟ Lᴏᴠᴇʀ Aᴛ Lᴀsᴛ} wrote: "Forgotten


In the back of mind,

Maybe I’ll find,

Something I lost,

I miss it the most,

It’s somewhere back there,

A dangerous ..."


no problem :)


message 32: by [deleted user] (new)

Two Confused

Two of you is too much
Two of you is not right
Two of you is confusing
Two of you shouldn't happen

One here
One there
One mine
One hers

Two of you so sweet
Two of you so kind
Two of you who I could never leave
Two of you out of my league

One I have
One I shouldn't
One I need
One I can't

Him or you
You or him
I can't leave him
But you are just right here


message 33: by [deleted user] (new)

thts sad. did that actually happen to you?


message 34: by [deleted user] (new)

Mal {Waiting for Possession} wrote: "₵î௹៛ without darkness there is no light wrote: "thts sad. did that actually happen to you?"

Which one???"


love games


message 35: by [deleted user] (new)

Mal {Waiting for Possession} wrote: "Do I?

Does my smile,

Really look that okay?

Do my eyes,

Look like I’ve been crying all day?

Do my arms,

Look like I’ve been cutting away?

Do I,

Look alright for the day?

Do I?

-Mal"


please tell me you dont cut. too many of my friends do :(


message 36: by [deleted user] (new)

Mal {Waiting for Possession} wrote: "₵î௹៛ without darkness there is no light wrote: "Mal {Waiting for Possession} wrote: "Do I?

Does my smile,

Really look that okay?

Do my eyes,

Look like I’ve been crying all day?

Do my arms,..."


thts sad


message 37: by [deleted user] (new)

Mal {Waiting for Possession} wrote: "₵î௹៛ without darkness there is no light wrote: "Mal {Waiting for Possession} wrote: "₵î௹៛ without darkness there is no light wrote: "thts sad. did that actually happen to you?"

Which one???"

lov..."


ok. i normally write from my own so i was about to go kill who ever did tht to you ;)


message 38: by [deleted user] (new)

Mal {Waiting for Possession} wrote: "₵î௹៛ without darkness there is no light wrote: "Mal {Waiting for Possession} wrote: "₵î௹៛ without darkness there is no light wrote: "Mal {Waiting for Possession} wrote: "₵î௹៛ without darkness there..."

what?


message 39: by [deleted user] (new)

Mal {Waiting for Possession} wrote: "₵î௹៛ without darkness there is no light wrote: "Mal {Waiting for Possession} wrote: "₵î௹៛ without darkness there is no light wrote: "Mal {Waiting for Possession} wrote: "₵î௹៛ without darkness there..."

ya. so? how am i awesome? i just like u a lot :)


message 40: by [deleted user] (new)

Mal {Waiting for Possession} wrote: "₵î௹៛ without darkness there is no light wrote: "Mal {Waiting for Possession} wrote: "₵î௹៛ without darkness there is no light wrote: "Mal {Waiting for Possession} wrote: "₵î௹៛ without darkness there..."

thts sad but i know what you mean. even my friends admit im a nerd. which the definition at my school is 'too smart to be cool'.


message 41: by [deleted user] (new)

see you. im a nerd. i just wish at my school i could be 'cool' as well.


message 42: by I am Dangerous (new)

I am Dangerous | 253 comments Wow! you guys are seriously talented...I feel ashamed


message 43: by I am Dangerous (new)

I am Dangerous | 253 comments Not to be gifted but i still write some childish sort...


message 44: by I am Dangerous (new)

I am Dangerous | 253 comments like the


I started on my homework
but my pen ran out of link
My hamster ate my homework
My computer's on the blink
I accidently dropped it
In the soup my mom was cooking
My brother flushed it down the drain
When i wasn't looking
My momther ran my homework
Through the washer and the dryer
An aeroplane crashed into our house
My homework caught fire
Tornadoes blew my notes away
Volcanoes struck our town
My homework was taken
By an evil killer clown
Some aliens abducted me
I had a shark attack
A pirate swiped my homework
And refused to give it back
It took so long to make these up
I realised with dread
It would have been easier
To do my homework instead-:)



message 45: by I am Dangerous (new)

I am Dangerous | 253 comments Mal {Waiting for Possession} wrote: "I am Dangerous wrote: "Not to be gifted but i still write some childish sort..."

You are gifted!! I'd love to write funny stuff thats amazing like yours but mine is all sad and depressing! :)"


Thanxxxx,XD you really think that????!!


message 46: by I am Dangerous (new)

I am Dangerous | 253 comments There's one more out of my head!!!!but you guys won't understand half of it:P

MY HISTORY BOOK


When i open my history book
I just don't give it a second look
Oh! It's so boring
That i just start shoring
Talking about emperors and kings

My eyes drooping sleepy winks
I travelled day dreaming
In the battle soldiers were screaming

Tansen was on the mike
And shahjahan on the bike
Mumtaz gave a clap
And on my cheek i got a slap

There stood my mother
Was it a dream?Yes,It was nothing true
My mother opened the book
And i had to give it a secon look:(



message 47: by I am Dangerous (new)

I am Dangerous | 253 comments OMG!they are really awesome,buddy!!!!They forced me to copy paste them in my laptop!!!

Hey Mal...Ummmm,Now that i see you have such a gift..............You will have to write poems for me if ever my teacher gives me such a homework:P


message 48: by Juliana (new)

Juliana | 2 comments im entering the foyle young peoples poet contest


message 49: by Juliana (new)

Juliana | 2 comments Nitzan wrote: "I'll love it if you guys check out my poems on my blog:
http://drugscalledwords.blogspot.co.il/

:)"


i would def


message 50: by Hristo (new)

Hristo Stoev | 1 comments That would be my first post here . Way back I had some spare time at work , felt kinda bored and wrote the following poem .

Shadow descent upon the earth
by clouds resembling hell's dirt,
darkness crawling like a plague
sucking, draining life away

It appears as an abomination
the spirit forged for annihilation,
within the eyes lie the terror
it's existence probably an error,
Storm they call it all,
dreadful creature with a nasty soul.

The Wind engage with no fear
agile, proud ,his fate is zeal ,
ignoring the voice of sanity,
marching on the quest for immortality .
He fails to defeat the beast
and now as a part of it's forces he shall be released .

The Moon has burst into silent cry,
gentle whisper has spread across the sky.
By the tiny call of help was the Sun awaken,
he knew that some action must be taken.
Destiny have his name,
wise and noble ,like god the same.
His sword of burning gold,
has ended many demons cold,
his armor imbued with radiance and might
kept him safe in every single fight.

The sun walks through field of ash
his thoughts are getting in a dash.
The hero spotted murky object in the distance,
a shadow started taunting in an instance.

Your fall shall be my rise,
the soul of yours would be my price.
Oh prince of light be sure
this clash you will not endure.

Indifferent of the taunting creep,
the hero decided to end this in a sweep.
Sword and shield against fang and claw,
it is getting quiet ,who has done the final blow ?

The Sun has kneeled down
above the wretched body of his enemy frown.
Go now ,go tell ,
say about me in hell.

..............................

The little shepherd woke up all in sweat,
his face was pale like he met the death.
Was this dream or reality,
have I witnessed insanity ?

Up in the sky the Sun was moving slow,
as usual with a shiny glow.
But when the shepherd was far away ,
the mighty hero smiled in a happy way .


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