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Salvaged Soul (Ignited, #3)
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message 1: by Desni (last edited May 23, 2015 09:45AM) (new) - added it

Desni Dantone (ddantone) | 7 comments 3rd book in series, WIP, would like opinion on the first 10 chapters, then the rest at a later date. Specifically interested in:

Plot flow (notes on slow parts, confusing parts, etc)

Characters/characterization (are they fleshed out enough?)

Specific scenes that stood out as strong or weak

Clear/Unclear understanding of plot developments

Specific phrases/sentences/paragraphs that held you up (even if you're not sure exactly what the problem was; I want to know any spots that the reader isn't flowing)

Strength/weakness of the POV of the two main characters

Anything that you feel is missing or not working


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Desni Dantone (ddantone) | 7 comments Salvaged Soul

Life in paradise isn’t exactly what Kris thought it would be. Treated like a prisoner and forced to keep her romance with Nathan hidden, she struggles to adapt to island life with the Kala. Worse, her specialties are coming in faster than she can control, and she fears the Skotadi within her will soon win the battle for her soul. Her only hope is to embrace her Incantation lineage, master the skills she’s supposed to have, and free herself of her destiny. If only she could figure out how to do it…

The ghosts of Nathan’s past still inhabit the island. Adapting to the Kala way of life again is something he will grudgingly accept, as long as they agree to help Kris. But falling back into the Kala system means being a Kala soldier, and when the gods ask for help, he cannot refuse. Sent around the world on a mission, he faces new dangers and stumbles upon a startling discovery that could change everything…

Together, they face their biggest hurdle yet and put their relationship to the ultimate test. When old temptations arise, new enemies emerge, and emotions run high, can their love survive?

From Amazon’s bestselling author, Desni Dantone, comes the third installment of The Ignited Series, where the danger is real, the stakes are higher, and nothing is as it seems. Continue the journey with Kris, Nathan, Alec, and Callie as they discover that when friends become enemies, enemies become friends, and the battles lines between good and evil blur, choosing the right side isn’t always easy.


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Jim Dodds | 226 comments Your story looks very interesting. If you're interested in a thorough edit, please take a look at my site...

its-your-story.weebly.com

Thank you,
Jim Dodds


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Desni Dantone (ddantone) | 7 comments Thank you, but I have an editor. I'm actually just looking for beta readers to make notes on how it reads, so I can make the necessary changes before it goes in for editing.


Sarah Olson (SarahFayOlson) | 2 comments Hey Desni! I sent you an email yesterday to let you know I'm interested!!


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Desni Dantone (ddantone) | 7 comments Sarah wrote: "Hey Desni! I sent you an email yesterday to let you know I'm interested!!"

Hey Sarah! I don't believe I got that email. Do you remember where you sent it to? Either way... I will definitely take you up on the offer. What email can I send it to, and what format do you want it in? (mobi, epub, pdf, or just plain old word?)


Sarah Olson (SarahFayOlson) | 2 comments Desni wrote: "Sarah wrote: "Hey Desni! I sent you an email yesterday to let you know I'm interested!!"

Hey Sarah! I don't believe I got that email. Do you remember where you sent it to? Either way... I will def..."


I'm pretty sure I sent it through your site and I will take the mobi! Send it to sarah.fay16@gmail.com

I'm excited to read it! :D


*Queen of Hearts* (MagzG1015) Sounds so good


Christy Lutz | 1 comments Desni, I would love to be a beta reader for you. I'd take a pdf at christylutz71@gmail.com.


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