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This doesn't have much to do with taylor swift except that she wrote or co-wrote all her songs... do you have any songs to post? Here's one I wrote, it's not that good... feedback appreciated!
You can’t see me

I wouldn’t be standing here
Unmoving
If I was walking with you
I wouldn’t be so
Imperceptible
If you could only
Observe your heart

Pre-Chorus:
Why am I invisible
Why am I
A window that you look through
I’m just the wind, you can’t see me
Though I try to take your breath away

Chorus:
You can’t see me
I’m just shattered glass
That hurts you more
When you’re giving all your love to her
And maybe it’s not evident
That I only feel for you
But it’s evident
That you only feel for her
You can’t see me

My hand wouldn’t be empty
And you would caress me
I’d have my arm around you
And you’d have my heart
Cuz I’ve tried to give it before
But you wouldn’t take it

Pre-Chorus:
Why am I invisible
Why am I
A window that you look through
I’m just the wind, you can’t see me
Though I try to take your breath away

Chorus:
You can’t see me
I’m just shattered glass
That hurts you more
When you’re giving all your love to her
And maybe it’s not evident
That I only feel for you
But it’s evident
That you only feel for you
You can’t see me

It’s just an empty soul
That’s bringing me forwatd
But it’s a broken heart
That makes me come back
To where I was before
In the darkness

Bridge:
You’re just the hole in me
That makes me go crazy
And despair is what gets to me
Alone in the rain

Pre-Chorus:
Why am I invisible
Why am I
A window that you look through
I’m just the wind, you can’t see me
Though I try to take your breath away

Chorus:
You can’t see me
I’m just shattered glass
That hurts you more
When you’re giving all your love to her
And maybe it’s not evident
That I only feel for you
But it’s evident
That you only feel for you
You can’t see me

Chorus:
You can’t see me
I’m just shattered glass
That hurts you more
When you’re giving all your love to her
And maybe it’s not evident
That I only feel for you
But it’s evident
That you only feel for you
You can’t see me




message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

Chey wrote: "This doesn't have much to do with taylor swift except that she wrote or co-wrote all her songs... do you have any songs to post? Here's one I wrote, it's not that good... feedback appreciated!
You..."


its very emotional


message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

heres one of mine:

A SECRET

Its midnight,
And I'm all alone.
Waiting for you to call me back.
Why havent you called yet?
And why did you call me tonight?

I'm tired of waiting,
Tired of staying up tonight,
And I'm tired of keeping and hiding,
Secrets from you.

Why did you call me?
What do you need from me tonight?
All i wany to do is sleep,
All i want to do is wait,
For you.

Do you love her?
Do you love me?
Cause I'm hiding s secret,
From you.

Can't you see it?
Hope is fading.
All because of you,
And the secret i'm hiding.

Hope will never lose faith,
But I can't wait this long for you.
I'm holding on,
But my eyes won't let me,
Tonight.

I'm tired of waiting,
Tired of staying up tonight,
And I'm tired of keeping and hidind,
A secret from you.

So here's the truth now,
Here's the story,
I've loved you from the start.

Do you love her?
Do you love me?
Casue I'm hiding a secret,
From you.




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Tell me what you think


message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

i like both of them!


message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

I really like your song, Adina... and thank you Leslie, and by the way does anybody know anyway to make it easy to create a tune? Thanks!


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

I like them both!!


message 8: by [deleted user] (new)

I'll post one of mine when I finish it!


message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

kool thxs everyone!


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

oops! when it says "...you only feel for you" in my song, it's actually "you only feel for her" anyway, I'm gonna' post a song I wrote soon, it's about this guy, named Stephen (no, not Hey, Stephen xD) anyway... I'll post it soon!


message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

kool


message 12: by [deleted user] (new)

Adina: my favorite part of your song ,I mean, I REALLY REALLY like it is :Hope will never lose faith,
But I can't wait this long for you.
I'm holding on,
But my eyes won't let me,
Tonight.



message 13: by [deleted user] (new)

it's just so pretty and emotional


message 14: by [deleted user] (new)

thank u


message 15: by Sarah jean (new)

Sarah jean  blank (Sarahjean) | 114 comments when i am on the bus i just get an idea text it to myself then put it on my thumbdrive, i've got 4 of those and 6 finished ones. i want to finnish them all and some how get a job in songwriting i just can sing, thats why liz rose is one of my idols. she co-writes some of tay's songs. so i will post one,


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Sarah jean  blank (Sarahjean) | 114 comments Haha,
so this one isnt my fave of mine- its based off of something someone did to my "friend" who is okay, like i like her but we arent best buddies, but i hate the dude who did this to her, anyways i havent gone through and edited or anything so it will be better later, this one is called "stupid, perfect lie"

He might say that he is sorry,
But his best friend likes you to
It just would not be right
If you weren’t so deep in it,
You wouldn’t have thought,
It was cute, was so thoughtful.
And you would have realized

{Chorus}
It was just a perfect lie
To get you deep inside
And you never thought anybody could,
Come around be as perfect as him.
But now you know why.
It was just some stupid,
Perfect lie.
{End chorus}

But then you see with some other girl,
You try to tell yourself its some stupid joke.
But you need to know
it has been a month,
And it’s been more than once.

{Repeat Chorus}

Sad but true,
He never fell for you.
And you want to
Be able to wake up soon.
Its like its killing you
Oh the truth its killing you
Casue,

{Repeat Chorus}

Yeah it was just a stupid perfect lie
Hurt you deep inside.
A perfect lie.



message 17: by Sarah jean (new)

Sarah jean  blank (Sarahjean) | 114 comments and this one is about this guy my friend has liked for like 2 years, and i hadnt told her i liked him to, i was sort of in denial and i was getting angry with her always saying how much she like him, and i sorta thought he liked me to, so i was a little angry when i wrote it, its called "he's yours, i'm his" like you like him, but he likes me. k, here goes.

I will tell you sometimes,
Stuff that’s not true
But it’s just the way that I do.


{Chorus}
If you want the truth
I just may give it to you
It might not make a smile,
But it’s the truth for a while
Maybe it’ll change and it
Will be backwards, but that’s
Not currently cause for now…
Hes yours, I’m his.
I’m sorry it’s; just the way it is….
{End chorus}

I know it seems rude
To point it out to you
But did you ever stop to think
That I am also wanting
The same things
And that this isn’t just
Your dream, it might
Not really seem
That I might think the same things
I’m sorry; it’s just the way it is

{repeat Chorus}

Even, if it he tell you that stuff
He tells everyone,
You just have to remember
Don’t loose your head again.

{repeat Chorus}

Hes yours but I’m his,
And that’s just the way it is,
Yeah he’s yours I’m his
That’s just the way it is…



message 18: by [deleted user] (new)

Great writing!Don't you find the easiest songs to write are the ones that are sad???



message 19: by Sarah jean (new)

Sarah jean  blank (Sarahjean) | 114 comments yeah. i do :)


message 20: by Sarah jean (new)

Sarah jean  blank (Sarahjean) | 114 comments Chey wrote: "This doesn't have much to do with taylor swift except that she wrote or co-wrote all her songs... do you have any songs to post? Here's one I wrote, it's not that good... feedback appreciated!
You..."


I realy like this :)




message 21: by Sarah jean (new)

Sarah jean  blank (Sarahjean) | 114 comments Chey wrote: "oops! when it says "...you only feel for you" in my song, it's actually "you only feel for her" anyway, I'm gonna' post a song I wrote soon, it's about this guy, named Stephen (no, not Hey, Stephen..."


this guy i used to like. and still do, is stephen in my phone contacts, email and eveerythin :)



message 22: by [deleted user] (new)

ok.. uh... this song is dedicated to stephen i guess, dont have a title for it....anyway:
you're a helpless animal
who doesn't stand a chance
in the real world
and you let yourself be known
the people trample on you
you're a wilted flower
you don't let your beauty shine
but I know it's hidden inside cuz...

chorus: we don't think like you do
and we don't feel like you do
no, we dont hurt like you do
and the one girl who tried
just tore up your picture

your faith stays strong
you share your pleas
with the only one who'll listen
and I try to stay nice
but I'm surrounded by them
won't they listen
when I say...

chorus: we don't think like you do
and we don't feel like you do
no, we dont hurt like you do
and the one girl who tried
just tore up your picture and
we don't think like you do
and we don't feel like you do
no, we dont hurt like you do
and the one girl who tried
just tore up your picture

your faith stays strong
you share your pleas
with the only one who'll listen...





ok....i know its not that good but it one that really comes form the heart, anybody know what it's about??





message 23: by [deleted user] (new)

nice



message 24: by [deleted user] (new)

anybody know what its about??


message 25: by [deleted user] (new)

its not a love song btw


message 26: by [deleted user] (last edited Mar 28, 2009 07:35PM) (new)

umm it seems like it's about u don't have to have the same opinions as other people but people don't listen when u have to say u want to say, something like that?


message 27: by [deleted user] (new)

whats it about?


message 28: by [deleted user] (new)

there's this guy (stephen) who wasnt exactly handicapped but had some mental issues and everybody hated him because his was different and he looked different and acted different...I really felt bad for him but whenever people are aund me they talk about stephen and say how annoying he is, I really felt bad for him but it's hard to understand him when so many people are saying the exact opposite, then there was one guy who i know... he was saying to us how he had a talk with stephen, and he felt so bad for him. because people kept on making fun of him for his appearance, and he's had a very hard life (your faith stays strong
you share your pleas
with the only one who'll listen ) and there was finally a person woho understood him, like me... so yeah, this is for stephen


message 29: by [deleted user] (new)

kool


message 30: by [deleted user] (new)

This Is For You
--------------

Hey ben,this is for you
this song is written just for you
now think of all the things we used to do
I know I could think a few
we planted apple seeds for a tree that never grew
and we wrote songs together, only us
I feel like that's so far away
I miss all the "used to"

chorus:and when I look at these photographs
everything seems wrong
this wasnt how I'd planned back then
now everything is gone
always swore I'd marry you tomorrow
but tomorrow never comes
so, Ben, this is for you

Hey, ben, this is for you
let me take you back when we were just two
we held hands as we crossed the yard
you snuck a kiss on my cheeks when it was just me and you
and then we were four
and swore you'd always wait
are you waiting for me now, Ben?
cuz I'm just so far away

chorus:and when I look at these photographs
everything seems wrong
this wasnt how I'd planned back then
now everything is gone
always swore I'd marry you tomorrow
but tomorrow never comes
so, Ben, this is for you

And, Ben, there is no other boy
who kept me feeling like myself
with you, I'd talk 'till I was out of breath
and told you secrets I'd tell no one else

chorus:Hey, ben, this is for you
you might've got the message wrong you might be confused
I've been an outsider since you didn't let me in
I don't plan on marrying you, like I did
I just want somebody like yu to talk to
remember back then when we were friends?
So, ben, this is for you


message 31: by [deleted user] (new)

ben?



message 32: by Sarah jean (new)

Sarah jean  blank (Sarahjean) | 114 comments thats realy good!


message 33: by [deleted user] (new)

Adina- Ben:somebody who was my friend a long time ago, mu... when I was two, three four I always said I'd marry him tomorrow xD, just wanna be friends now

Sarah Jean- thanks!!!


message 34: by [deleted user] (new)

so r u friends now?


message 35: by Sarah jean (new)

Sarah jean  blank (Sarahjean) | 114 comments oh and heres another one. its another sad one. oh my gosh i just realised all 11 of the songs i am working on are. shiz. whatever. "but thats not the way life goes"

Chorus
If I could write my perfect fairy tale,
This is how’d go,
I’d make you prince charming,
And I’d be waiting for you to come
And when you finally got here,
You would take me away from this place
Into something new, and special, some thing different
But Life’s not a fairy tale
And that’s not the way it goes
End chorus

Even though I know my wishes wont always come true,
I still wish for you.
Every day, every night, ever birthday candle, every wish bone,
Yeah I still wish for my fairy tale dreams to come true,

Yeah and…

Repeat Chorus

I can pretend that the hallway was a courtyard,
Covered in roses,
I could pretend that our school clothes were
gowns and tuxedos,
And I could wish, wish, wish that this were
My real life
But for now its just pretend, a figure of imagination
Just a thought just a wish just a dream
But,

Repeat Chorus

You can wish the hardest that you can.
But it all just a thought, that wont ever come true.
Because life’s not a fairy tale
And that’s not the way it goes…
Yeah not the way it goes




message 36: by [deleted user] (new)

adina-um... nope :( I would never actually sing him this song, I just had to write it down in some form xD

Sarah Jean-Nice work!!!! Yeah, I know, I've written almost forty song (the majority sucks) and most of them are sad.... its a lot easier in my opinion


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Happily ever after
-----------------
and I thought it would be
a cute little story if we grew up and fell in love
and every second that passes by
you know who I'm thinking of
and when raindrops are golden
and skies are blue
it's my fairytale ending...to be with you

chorus:oh,i never knew it'd go this way
I'm in my castle far away
and you dont know where to find me in my tower up high
but I'm looking forward to the end
when you urn and go 'round the bend
happily ever after--with golden raindrops and a blue sky

and the young prince and princess
used to play with eachother
skipping stones while their parents made fuss
she'd dream of when shes queen
and she's sittin' by the king
been together through so much
when the creatures are singin'
and the flowers too
it's my fairytale ending...to be with you

chorus:oh,i never knew it'd go this way
I'm in my castle far away
and you dont know where to find me in my tower up high
but I'm looking forward to the end
when you urn and go 'round the bend
happily ever after--with golden raindrops and a blue sky

well, the prince then betrayed
and ran off with the maid
the princess was left alone
she crept up the tower
the prince's "pretty flower"
had nowhere else to go
and she cried and cried
her hope had died
but not her fairy tale ending... to be with you

chorus:oh,i never knew it'd go this way
I'm in my castle far away
and you dont know where to find me in my tower up high
but I'm looking forward to the end
when you urn and go 'round the bend
happily ever after--with golden raindrops and a blue

and the white rose
he gave six months ago
is trampled on the ground...

chorus:oh,i never knew it'd go this way
I'm in my castle far away
and you dont know where to find me in my tower up high
but I'm looking forward to the end
when you urn and go 'round the bend
happily ever after--with golden raindrops and a blue


message 38: by [deleted user] (new)

urn=turn... btw, i know that was pretty long, by the way I wrot ethat one a while ago, sorry sarah jean it does kinda seem like yours but I wrote before I read yours =D


message 39: by Sarah jean (new)

Sarah jean  blank (Sarahjean) | 114 comments i ♥ it.

haha. i like anything realy. i cant critique songs. its like impossibl


message 40: by [deleted user] (new)

then ur a nice critic


message 41: by Sarah jean (new)

Sarah jean  blank (Sarahjean) | 114 comments yes :)

but only at songs.

everthing else. well thats a diffrent story. ha.


message 42: by Sarah jean (new)

Sarah jean  blank (Sarahjean) | 114 comments Chey wrote: "urn=turn... btw, i know that was pretty long, by the way I wrot ethat one a while ago, sorry sarah jean it does kinda seem like yours but I wrote before I read yours =D"

haha its fine




message 43: by [deleted user] (new)

:)


message 44: by erinbobarin94 (new)

erinbobarin94 ive tried to write songs before, only a couple. not very good. but i just thought of a line for a song recently, its:

"they say good guys always finish last, but its the bad boys who are going nowhere fast"

thats my one-line song. lol.


message 45: by [deleted user] (new)

cool... that would be a cool bridge....


message 46: by [deleted user] (new)

HI


message 47: by erinbobarin94 (new)

erinbobarin94 Chey wrote: "cool... that would be a cool bridge...."

THANX!


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We'll Find The end
----------------
making paper airplanes
ready to fly to the middle of nowhere
building up the sky with puzzle pieces
from a box we found in your closet

playing hopskotch, skipping stones
never believing he's the one
chalk in the driveway, making fun of the pretty girls
who can't believe you're hanging out with me

chorus:
summer skies, rainy days, never caring what anyone says
never believing life could be lived without your crazy ways
winter snow, don't you know, never thought things were gonna' hold
just take my hand and lead me through this maze
I know we'll find the end

Fourteen, this summer I'm crazy in love
but trying to figure out what you're thinking of
cuz you're ups and downs, smiles and frowns
but I still can't help thinking you're an angel from above

now makeup on, first date, first kiss
and praying to God that i won't miss
whispered "I love you"s. sitting by the edge of the pool
wishing on stars that i didn't act like a fool

chorus:
summer skies, rainy days, never caring what anyone says
never believing life could be lived without your crazy ways
winter snow, don't you know, never thought things were gonna' hold
just take my hand and lead me through this maze
I know we'll find the end


sand castles in the summer breeze
you, looking at me, and feeling pleased
cuz I have a smile on my face
you say that it makes you melt

chorus:
summer skies, rainy days, never caring what anyone says
never believing life could be lived without your crazy ways
winter snow, don't you know, never thought things were gonna' hold
just take my hand and lead me through this maze
I know we'll find the end


cuz I know that we won't break down,no, no, no... we'll find the end


message 49: by erinbobarin94 (new)

erinbobarin94 that was awesome! really great.


message 50: by [deleted user] (new)

thankz :D


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