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message 1: by Cait Sith (new)

Cait Sith Fairy (willowkeeper) | 40 comments Mod
Under a long forgotten hill
Near where the forgotten lay still
is a place of mice and rat
that is where my heart and soul are at

I had some friends but they are gone
Much like the abusive father of the fawn
They hurt me and broke my will
So I too shall soon lay still.


message 2: by Johns (new)

Johns | 16 comments Mod
That was sad.... and really good too....


message 3: by Cait Sith (new)

Cait Sith Fairy (willowkeeper) | 40 comments Mod
thanks


message 4: by Cait Sith (new)

Cait Sith Fairy (willowkeeper) | 40 comments Mod
that's how i feel


message 5: by Johns (new)

Johns | 16 comments Mod
I know. Most poetry is written when the poet is sad, I've learned... I'm sorry Johnny.


Mrs.Crazy (nico di angelo) | 12 comments ...that was really good..


message 7: by Cait Sith (new)

Cait Sith Fairy (willowkeeper) | 40 comments Mod
thanks


message 8: by Cait Sith (new)

Cait Sith Fairy (willowkeeper) | 40 comments Mod
The keeper sees all
Except for those at the ball
The Willow stands free
Well as much as a tree
The Friends, there are none
For you don't like my fun


message 9: by Cait Sith (new)

Cait Sith Fairy (willowkeeper) | 40 comments Mod
The keeper is eating the dead
He cut off then ate your friends head
He despises the taste of deer
He prefers your brother's ear
His hunger and speed never slows
Until he's eating your sister's nose


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

Thats great.Keep it Up


message 11: by Cait Sith (new)

Cait Sith Fairy (willowkeeper) | 40 comments Mod
Ok I was being modest about this one, but I actually wrote it

A willow stands tall and alone
Upon a hill hiding the bone
The Keeper protects the secret here
He knows who and what you fear
He will find you, if he wants
Something from you, that's why it hunts.
Without the willow he will die
But the willow stands till the end is nigh.

No one knows where it stands
Except for a couple, of small bands
They live near the hill of dread
Guarding people from the dead.

The Keeper kills them one by one
Until the deed is all done
And the sun shall fall to moon
All are gone before high noon.

No one left, but the kings
And the evil the keeper brings.

This will happen in while
Once the hill, has moved a mile.

So do not fear, you are safe
But you should practice to strafe


message 12: by Erica (new)

Erica | 1 comments That is so good!


message 13: by Cait Sith (new)

Cait Sith Fairy (willowkeeper) | 40 comments Mod
:) thanks


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