Review my story? Skylark Black series!

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Can someone please read a short excerpt of a story i'm writing? Much appreciated.

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Alexis wrote: "I think it's really good so far! There are some things I think you could change concerning punctuation, but other than that I think you're good (I would review the first large paragraph). Also, fou..."



Thank you so very much! I would like to ask you a few more questions such as:

Who do you think Skylark and Blade are?
What do you think will happen after reading this excerpt?
What do you think they mean by family clan?