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Writing: > Review my story? Skylark Black series!

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Skyscraper (everviolet) | 14 comments Mod
Can someone please read a short excerpt of a story i'm writing? Much appreciated.

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Skyscraper (everviolet) | 14 comments Mod
Alexis wrote: "I think it's really good so far! There are some things I think you could change concerning punctuation, but other than that I think you're good (I would review the first large paragraph). Also, fou..."

Thank you so very much! I would like to ask you a few more questions such as:

Who do you think Skylark and Blade are?
What do you think will happen after reading this excerpt?
What do you think they mean by family clan?

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