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Pari {Ridhee} (ridhee) | 19 comments Mod
Hi guys! This a place where you'll get reviews on your stories, be it anything! (Poems too!) Come post it here!


Julia, dude call me JJ | 3 comments I have the story on my goodreads. " we set fire to the raiN" POV's in the minor and one or two magor charters of hunger games, Foxface, rue, clove/cato ( together), mavel, Peeta ect.




FOXFACE"S POV 1.

As the bright moon shown high, I slipped out of bed. My red hair was glistling. My five other brothers and father were still asleep, I had no mother lost her to the 55 hunger games when I was 10. I slipped on my hunting boots, and jacket. I walk out of my home in District 5, where we have power and ship it to the Capital that rule's us all. It's 4 am, this is when I get up becuase i'm build like a fox, getting up early, going to sleep late. My name is Leslie Ann shark. I run and flip over the fence that surondds the woods where I do my hunting. I am amazing at skill and flips and whatnot. I sigh, it's the reaping, there was a war sometime back, and for revenge the Capitol makes the 12 disricts of peman pick two children between the ages of 12 to 18 be in the "hunger games" a fight to the death agasint 24 other children. It's sad really. As I walk I gather berries and herbs, shoot squarlles and small animals with my bow and arrows. Finally at about 8am at walk back, my father and brothers are up. We have a weak breakfast of some goat cheese and herbs. My three brother- John, Kendall, and Kaleb are over 18 and have to work in the power "cabin" they send power the the Capitol, And me and my other two broters- Elliot and Thomas are twins and are both 15 so they are in the reaping. My dad, Micheal is crying softly for I am his only daughter, since my mother died, he has been closed, never laughing or smiling that's why I want to win so bad if I do get pick...........


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I'll post my stories here as soon as possible. Meanwhile some of my stories are here:

Http://www.my-diary.org/read/d/692061

Feel free to send me feedback!! Oh, and the feedback button shows at the end of each entry. Thanks!


Hazel  ~ Avalon ~ http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...
This is a book thing I am writing for a friend in my year. She thinks it's amazing but I don't think so... What do you think? BTW it's kinda long and not finished!


Hazel  ~ Avalon ~ P.S. its a bit of a girly book


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It doesn't matter! :)


Hazel  ~ Avalon ~ Yay
My goat says yay as well
So does my chicken
Wait, I don't have a chicken
duh duh duuuuuh


message 8: by [deleted user] (new)

Ha ha!!! My cat says that she loves your story, my horse says he hates it, my pig says he is crazy (which I don't know what it has to do with your story), and my Mom is speaking Spanish. Wait, how did my Mom get here????? Ha ha ha!!!!!! XDDDDD


Hazel  ~ Avalon ~ CONT. IN CHAT MWAHAHAHA


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I WILL!!!!!!!! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! ;DDDDD


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Ninth  (Ninthkhashcannan) | 17 comments http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

The Chill on the Hill...

these are the first few chapters of a book I am working on... please comment on my writing style.


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You guys' stories rock!!!!


message 14: by Jeff (new)

Jeff Coleman Hey guys! This is my first post to the group. Here's a really short flash fiction that I wrote and put up on Goodreads. Hope you guys like it:

https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...


❄️ Propertea Of Frostea ❄️ Bitter SnoBerry ❄ (BerryNumey) I Am Crazy, Random, Awepar, and the CQ wrote: "You guys' stories rock!!!!"

Thanks! :D


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Jeff wrote: "Hey guys! This is my first post to the group. Here's a really short flash fiction that I wrote and put up on Goodreads. Hope you guys like it:

https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/......"


Awesome!! :D


message 17: by Althea *Go wolves and dragons!*(Coach Hedge) (last edited May 15, 2013 04:14AM) (new)

Althea *Go wolves and dragons!*(Coach Hedge) Inigo (Eiyah_Fantasyfreak) | 24 comments Julia And maybe they'd be happy for a while wrote: "I have the story on my goodreads. " we set fire to the raiN" POV's in the minor and one or two magor charters of hunger games, Foxface, rue, clove/cato ( together), mavel, Peeta ect.



FOXFAC..."


Good job:D It sounds awesome!


Althea *Go wolves and dragons!*(Coach Hedge) Inigo (Eiyah_Fantasyfreak) | 24 comments Jeff wrote: "Hey guys! This is my first post to the group. Here's a really short flash fiction that I wrote and put up on Goodreads. Hope you guys like it:

https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/......"


*claps* WOW.


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Ninth  (Ninthkhashcannan) | 17 comments The Monster Gangsters
a short story

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...


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Ninth  (Ninthkhashcannan) | 17 comments Althea *Go wolves and dragons!*(Coach Hedge) wrote: ":O A-W-E-S-O-M-E."

THANK YOU!!; XD


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Nishanth wrote: "The Monster Gangsters
a short story

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3..."


You write good!


Julia, dude call me JJ | 3 comments I just got my fanfiction account back up and running. My first story. Reviews welcome!
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9434142/1...

if that doesn't show up, the author will be Percabeth-fan-02, and the author will have one story..


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Julia. Just call me Merida. wrote: "I just got my fanfiction account back up and running. My first story. Reviews welcome!
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9434142/1...

if that doesn't show up, the author will be Pe..."


Awesome fan fiction!!!


Julia, dude call me JJ | 3 comments thanks.


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Rula (rsweby) | 1 comments I have already written a novel that I would love to share with all the members on Goodreads - "Lost In Love"


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