Need feedback on my new book trailers please..

[Pam]

Hi everyone! I could use some feedback on my trailers please and thank you. Also if you like them, please like them on youtube and share them. Thanks so much.

http://youtu.be/JZBhQVR6_Ds

http://youtu.be/r7nTbp5l_H0

[Randy]

Good visuals but definitly too long. A trailer is a 1 minute advert to entice reading. Yours is more like a movie pitch. I would avoid showing characters faces let the readers decide what they should look like. Your story should be sumed up in a couple lines and end with your cover like you have and where to buy. If it is an action story cut it like a music video with a beat that refelcts action to draw people in.

[Pam]

Thanks Randy