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message 1: by Clare D' Lune (new)

Clare D' Lune You have until Sunday afternoon to post a poem on here before the Topic changes. Please post it directly onto this topic, rather than posting a link. You're welcome to discuss poems on here also.

This week's Topic is color. If anyone has any objections to this topic, please go to the Poetry Topic Objections post.

Poems can be as long and short as you want them to be. This is not a contest, it's just for fun and to show off our own poetry.

A Filthy Youth groupie | 28 comments This is really short, but it just popped into my head, so I'm posting it!

The colors blend
And I can barely see
What's right in front of me

message 3: by Eric▲ (new)

Eric▲ | 38 comments before i knew you, i was blue,
when i saw you, i was red,
when you said yes, i was yellow,
when i saw you with another, i was green,
and then i was crimson,
and now i am blue again

message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

Slipping falling
Running fussing

Slpayed out in front
The world can see

Bright and briliant
For all to see

So perfect and nice
Gentle and cool

The colors of the world
The colors are what I see

message 5: by Clare D' Lune (new)

Clare D' Lune whoa! awesomeness!

message 6: by Elanor (new)

Elanor (gobbldygook) | 2 comments twisting through the living waters
bathing in the golden light
tendrils whipping, dripping, flipping
slapping on the concrete shore
colors soak into the ground

spur of the moment...feels like there should be more, but not quite sure what, yet.

message 7: by Clare D' Lune (new)

Clare D' Lune I like it! great description!

message 8: by Angel♥ (last edited Feb 24, 2009 02:21PM) (new)

Angel♥ (angellover512)

Vivid colors
Indigo blending into blue
Violet swirling in vortexes
Interlocked together to make a new hue
Drawn together to appeal to the Eye
Lemon colored rays streak across the piece
You pull the brush across the paper
Best hues you could find decorate it
Earthy colors are scattered across
Awesome details that make it pop out
Under the strokes and colors is a meaning
Tracing lines that aren't there with bursts of color
Interesting results happen
Floral colors add emotion
Unmistakable beauty appears at the end
Loops and lines create the image
Charming animals and creatures
Outstanding landscapes
Lasting sunsets and sunrises
Ovals and circles
Red gives a warm feeling
Special tools for a masterpiece:
read the first letter
of each line
above these 3

message 9: by Eric▲ (new)

Eric▲ | 38 comments oh thats just awesome

message 10: by Arthur, Live a little Give a lot (new)

Arthur | 554 comments Mod
Awesome Angel!! Your poem Vivid colors suggests thoughtfulness.

message 11: by Clare D' Lune (new)

Clare D' Lune oh my gosh! LOVE IT! love the hidden words!

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