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message 1: by Grace (new)

Grace (fictionaladventures) Thank you! Well this is my book Something Else Entirely: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3... and I need critiques! Don't hesitate to tell me what doesn't work, as long as you give me suggestions as to fixing it. Enjoy :D

message 2: by Grace (new)

Grace (fictionaladventures) There are a few cuss words (but not many) and kissing but I think it should be okay ... are you under 12?

message 3: by Grace (new)

Grace (fictionaladventures) Then I guess that's up to you. It's meant for teens, though.

message 4: by Grace (new)

Grace (fictionaladventures) That's completely fine. It's not meant for people under 13 or 14 anyways.

message 5: by Grace (new)

Grace (fictionaladventures) The link below is of a short prologue I wrote of a book I'm interested in writing. My plot so far has many gaps though, so I'd love for you guys to read this and comment (on the story, NOT here) with any ideas you have that might work for it.


message 6: by Grace (new)

Grace (fictionaladventures) Wrote a new short story from the time of the Titanic called This Weightlessness. It's only four short chapters so I'd love for you guys to take a look and tell me what you think I can improve on! http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3... (comments ON THE STORY please, not here)

message 7: by Grace (new)

Grace (fictionaladventures) So I finally got around to writing a sequel to my first posted short story, Inordinate. This one's called Exorbitant (Brian's POV) and there will be a third posted later today or tomorrow called Irrevocable.

In case you missed the first one: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

Exorbitant: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

I would love reviews and suggestions on how to improve - even negative reviews are welcome! Please comment ON THE STORY, though, not here.

message 8: by Grace (new)

Grace (fictionaladventures) And finally, the short story trilogy is completed:

Inordinate: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

Exorbitant: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

And finally, Irrevocable: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

Check it out and post your critiques! On the story, though, NOT here. Please and thank you :D

message 9: by Grace (new)

Grace (fictionaladventures) Read this please! http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3... If you have a title suggestion, I've very open to them! (Comments on story please, NOT here)

message 10: by Grace (new)

Grace (fictionaladventures) This is a short story called Lake Mors and I'd love to get critiques on it please! http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3... (Comments on story please, NOT here)

message 11: by Grace (new)

Grace (fictionaladventures) Read this please and give me critiques! http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3... (Comments on story please, NOT here)

message 12: by Grace (new)

Grace (fictionaladventures) So guys ... I wrote a Twilight parody :D (just the ending of it, though). Go read it: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3... (comments ON THE STORY, not here)

message 13: by Grace (new)

Grace (fictionaladventures) Here are some short poems I wrote a while back: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3.... Please read and let me know what you think! (comments on the story please, not here)

message 14: by Grace (new)

Grace (fictionaladventures) URGENT MESSAGE: I just found my book Something Else Entirely posted on the web by someone else (here's the link: http://www.quotev.com/story/2516866/S...). Everyone please do me the biggest favor ever and go to that link and report it! It needs to be taken down as soon as possible! I repeat, this is URGENT!

message 15: by Grace (new)

Grace (fictionaladventures) Juliana~The Story Of Amelia Pond wrote: "Who would do that?"

I have no idea. But thankfully it's taken down now.

message 16: by Grace (new)

Grace (fictionaladventures) If you need some inspiration or you just need to feel loved (whether you're Christian or not), click here: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3.... I've posted a mix of things in the devotionals I read with bits of my own thoughts. Hopefully something about one (or more) of these will bring you hope. (Comments ON the link, not here. Please and thank you)

message 17: by Grace (new)

Grace (fictionaladventures) I finally got around to writing another short story! Right now, it's called "Something Like Fate," but if you have any other title suggestions, let me know by commenting on it. Here's the link: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3.... I need some brutal critiques, so please post them on the story, not here to let me know how I can edit and improve this. Thank you so much!

message 18: by Grace (new)

Grace (fictionaladventures) I am very happy to present the first chapter to my new book, Like The Stars. I am currently working on it, but plan to be finished by June 30th. After that, I'll just take a few days to edit and then it'll all be up here. Please comment letting me know what you think, but on the story please, not here! Link: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

message 19: by Grace (new)

Grace (fictionaladventures) I posted a deleted scene from my first book, Something Else Entirely. If you wanna read it, click the link! Leave a comment on the story letting me know what you think.

message 20: by Grace (new)

Grace (fictionaladventures) I added the second and third chapters to Like The Stars. Please give this a quick look and comment on the story letting me know what I can improve! (Please don't comment on this topic) http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

message 21: by Grace (new)

Grace (fictionaladventures) Hey guys! It's been a while since I've written anything short though I have gotten four books written now, so here are two new things! Please check them out and comment on the stories please, not here.

A poem called "I am too happy to fall asleep"

and a short story in verse called A Boy Named Bailey .

Thank you guys so much! God bless!

message 22: by Grace (new)

Grace (fictionaladventures) Another short thing, this time in the form of a letter.

Every Reason I Love You

Please let me know what you think and comment on the story please, not here. Thank you so much!

message 23: by Grace (new)

Grace (fictionaladventures) Alright guys, I really need your help. I'm planning my 5th book and I really want to find a title. Here's a little embarrassingly terrible overview in case it sparks any ideas in those awesome heads of yours:

Jenna is the MC and she's kind of sarcastic and funny (think Julia in Meant to Be). She is in love with her best friend Paul and thinks there might actually be a chance for something to happen between them but at some point they kiss and he realizes it was a mistake and makes it clear nothing is going to happen between them. Their friendship kind of dribbles off after that and Jenna becomes friends with this guy named Charlie and eventually they fall in love. Ooh, also she's a really hardworking student but her suppressed dream is to go to Alaska. Charlie helps her realize that dream and she finally follows it. Basically the theme will be Follow your gut and the right person will follow it with you. It's supposed to be a YA Romantic Comedy thing and she's clumsy and likes big words.

So basically I need a title. I'm thinking it might have a funny word in it, like "canoodle" or "cantankerous" or "epitome." Maybe something like "The Epitome of ____"? I was thinking maybe "The Epitome of Everything" but I would really love any other suggestion. If it's cute or funny or quirky that would be perfect. If anyone can give me any suggestions at all, I will seriously love you forever.

Thank you so much to whoever tries to help! It's much appreciated!

message 24: by Grace (new)

Grace (fictionaladventures) Some of you may remember my book, Something Else Entirely, that I took down a few years ago. Hopefully, you'll be happy to hear that it is back up! Happy reading! https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...

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