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MY BOOK / POEM IS PUBLISHED! > My poem STARTS AND CONSTELLATIONS in 'Full of Crow'

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message 2: by Koeeoaddi (new)

Koeeoaddi (Koee) I love this one, Rose. Congratulations!


message 3: by Rose (new)

Rose Boehm (rosemaryboehm) | 2668 comments Thank you all. Basking in your support.


message 4: by Sally Boots (new)

Sally Boots (Sally-boots) | 760 comments Well done, Rose.


message 5: by Arthur (new)

Arthur (poetryplus) sarah,
what do you think of this one i wrote?

Poor Captured Star
(A Sonnet)

Upon a time I once
Ruled darkness so renown,
The perimeter I lived,
Science shot me down.
They asked of me my name,
I told them it was “Star”,
They said,I was insane
Or had drunk a celestial bar.
They shouted,”you're so poor”,
“And why have you five eyes?”
I said,”like you for fame”,
“with these, for peace I cry”.
My shining all died out, no chance of my rebirth,
Etched on my cosmic stone, “goodbye you wicked earth”.

By: Arthur C. Ford,Sr.,poet/editor of “The Pen”
wewuvpoetry@hotmail.com
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message 6: by Sally Boots (new)

Sally Boots (Sally-boots) | 760 comments Arthur--I'll take a look at it later, but please post your poem on a separate "I appreciate poetry critique" thread. This thread is Rose's recent braggable moment, and it's unfair to crash it.


message 7: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 5061 comments Very nice, Rose.


message 8: by Arthur (new)

Arthur (poetryplus) SORRY, I THOUGHT I WAS ADDING TO IT, NOT CRASHING IT.

arthur


message 9: by Rose (new)

Rose Boehm (rosemaryboehm) | 2668 comments Sally, not to worry... Arthur, no problem. I LOVE: "braggable moment". Wonderful. hahahaha


message 10: by Sally Boots (new)

Sally Boots (Sally-boots) | 760 comments Glad you like it. :D
You can still call me Sarah. I just wanted to distinguish myself from all the other Sarahs so I changed my GR profile name.


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