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message 1: by alias Jane Doe (last edited Sep 02, 2009 11:11AM) (new)

alias Jane Doe (aliasjanedoe) | 26 comments Okay, this is just like the other one. Try to keep it short, no changing things that other people have wrote. We'll make a story just continuing off of what everyone else wrote.

It was a dark and stormy night, which wasn't all that unusual, because all nights are dark, and many just happen to be stormy.

message 2: by Victor, King's Blade (new)

Victor (damoclesword) | 604 comments Mod
The wind whistled a gloomy tune through the night and the shadows seemed to envelop any sources of light. A perfect night for the unsavory denizens of other worlds to crawl out from their deserted hiding places.

message 3: by alias Jane Doe (new)

alias Jane Doe (aliasjanedoe) | 26 comments ^.^ Awesome. Sorry, talk about a mood breaker.

In fact, outside the window on the hill, you could see Dr. Frankinstine putting Igor back to work. You don't know how many times Igor's just sat around clocking in overtime waiting for the perfect dark and stormy night.

message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

But what he didn't know was the crude blade fixed in Igor's gnarled hand, just as jagged and filthy as his fingertips.

message 5: by DJ (new)

DJ (pseudonymjohndoe) | 23 comments The scene was perfect for revenge!!!

message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

Dr. Frankenstine finished giving Igor the last menial chore, and began to work on his experiment, the sole purpose of his life.

message 7: by alias Jane Doe (last edited Feb 15, 2009 05:47AM) (new)

alias Jane Doe (aliasjanedoe) | 26 comments While nearby, there stood a man, hooded and cloaked. He was hard to make out, but if the wind happened to blow his cloak while you stared in his direction, you might see it's faint outline against the dark sky. He watched Dr. Frankenstine in silence, without moving a muscle. Watching. Waiting. Waiting for the right moment. Waiting for revenge.

message 8: by DJ (new)

DJ (pseudonymjohndoe) | 23 comments But whose was it to be? One could imagine that Dr. Frankenstine did not know he was there. Sometimes imagination is reality sometimes it is not.

message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

At the exact moment the man flew from the shadows, arms outstretched, cloak streaming behind him, Igor leaped from his place behind Dr. Frankenstine and ended the man's life with his crude blade.

message 10: by alias Jane Doe (new)

alias Jane Doe (aliasjanedoe) | 26 comments Igor felt the blade hit solid flesh, but even as he pulled it back the solidness dissapeared. The cloak fell to the ground slowly, and lie there with nothing underneath. The man was gone.

A cold laugh split the air and they turned to see a woman standing there. Shauna. "So. He escaped you again," she said, with a cold trace of laughter in her voice.

message 11: by Joon (new)

Joon (JoonChang) | 409 comments Mod
Igor felt the darkness swallowing hime up. He had no chance of escaping. Then, he felt like he was falling and the next thing he knew, he was outside.

message 12: by DJ (new)

DJ (pseudonymjohndoe) | 23 comments He awoke, his head ponding, staring at the stars in the sky. As he sat up, the stars moved with him, but in the blackness he could see nothing else.
"I must be seeing those stars" he thought as the headache began to disapate.

Then he was alone, empty, no throbing in his head to cradle him in its iron fist, nor stars for the peace and false light.

"I am alone."


message 13: by Joon (new)

Joon (JoonChang) | 409 comments Mod
The door opened and the evil Dr. Frankenstine came in. The woman he saw was also there.

message 14: by [deleted user] (new)

"Begin the tests," snapped the Doctor. "And, make sure he takes his...medicine." Shauna giggled girlishly, completely out of place with her over-sized, gorilla-like features and salt and pepper hair.
"Right away, Doctor."

message 15: by Joon (new)

Joon (JoonChang) | 409 comments Mod
Igor tried to escape, but realized that ropes were holding him. Then, he remembered that knife in his shoe. When the two evil people weren't looking, he took the knife and ripped the ropes. He then escaped.

message 16: by [deleted user] (new)

Seizing the window, he kicked a hole big enough for his grotesque body and leaped out into the darkness.

message 17: by Joon (new)

Joon (JoonChang) | 409 comments Mod
However, a pair of big and long arms grabbed him and pulled him out.

message 18: by [deleted user] (new)

Filled with fury at his foiled plan, Igor spun around and lashed out.

message 19: by Joon (new)

Joon (JoonChang) | 409 comments Mod
Unfortunatley, a brick wall was in front of him and he hit the wall. He fainted and the next thing he knew, he was tied in ropes again.

message 20: by [deleted user] (new)

He spat and tried to remove his gag, but failed miserably and didn't know what to do.

message 21: by Joon (new)

Joon (JoonChang) | 409 comments Mod
The next thing he knew, he felt a sharp pain and saw the madman taking a sample of his blood.

message 22: by DJ (new)

DJ (pseudonymjohndoe) | 23 comments "Don't worry" he purred, "I am just conferming results."

Igor's stommach began to cry varying degrees of anarchy.

"What did he do to me?" He cried in desparation.

message 23: by [deleted user] (new)

This had never happened before. He wondered what he had done wrong.

message 24: by Joon (new)

Joon (JoonChang) | 409 comments Mod
Suddenly, the research area collapsed and everyone was buried.

message 25: by [deleted user] (new)

Igor struggled to free himself from under a beam, but...

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