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New Vampire books just out > Her Romance With A Human - A SEXY Paranormal Romance

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message 1: by Jodie (new)

Jodie Long (JodieLong) | 1 comments Hi everyone,

I'm new to the forum and would just like to say 'hello' and would love for people to take a look at my new vampire romance.

It's a short story and at 99c I know you will have a great time reading it.

It's part one.

http://www.amazon.com/dp/B007TNSL52

https://www.amazon.co.uk/dp/B007TNSL52

Thanks so much,
Jodie Long


message 2: by Francis (new)

Francis Franklin (FrancisJamesFranklin) | 535 comments I'm genuinely confused. Right from the start.

What is a 'forelock'? I mean, it's either a piece of a horse's harness, or a lock of hair just above the forehead.

And what is this supposed to mean?
'... since no man was allowed to grace her path; she would be able to appreciate the God given attractiveness she beheld.'

Oh, and confines rather than confides.

Please give serious thought to editing this!


message 3: by Rita (new)

Rita (rccola1945hotmailcom) | 513 comments Jodie wrote: "Hi everyone,

I'm new to the forum and would just like to say 'hello' and would love for people to take a look at my new vampire romance.

It's a short story and at 99c I know you will have a great..."
I'll try it when I finish the ones that I have.


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