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message 1: by M (new)

M | 1656 comments The Skull


Amid the bleached bones of a hull
left rank with seaweed and storms’ scud,
she drank a dark wine from a skull,
under a moon swollen with blood.

From what had been a fine map case,
the flame glinting on rusting swords,
a twisted candle lit her face,
the pale wax dripping on mossed boards.

She studied me with ghostly eyes:
“Why have you come where only waves
from storms disturb the calm that lies
on this old wreck and the sea caves?”

I answered, but what homely words
escaped the narrows of my throat
pursued the lone way of sea birds
in lines some love-mad poet wrote.

“Would you” she warned, “taste ancient seas,
the moon, the soul’s eternal lull?”
I fell before her on my knees
and drank the strange wine in the skull.


message 2: by Ajay (new)

Ajay (Ajay_N) | 225 comments Perfect, as always M!


message 3: by Janet (new)

Janet | 103 comments Captivating, dreamy, wonderful. I like this one very much. Good work.


message 4: by M (new)

M | 1656 comments Thank you, Ajay and Janet! I’m glad you liked it.


message 5: by Michelle (last edited Sep 24, 2012 07:39PM) (new)

Michelle Reid (MichelleReidArtintheWords) | 10 comments This is a favorite of mine.... Thank you for sharing it...


message 6: by M (new)

M | 1656 comments Thank you, Michelle. I have a lot of fun writing this sort of thing!


message 7: by Doug (new)

Doug | 1197 comments M,

Another great one.

Doug


message 8: by M (new)

M | 1656 comments Thank you, Doug!


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