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message 1: by Michael (new)

Michael | 2 comments not sure I am doing this correctly but here is the beginning
Murphy was easily distracted. He was looking across the room at the young blond-blue guy sitting on the brown plaid ‘colonial’ sofa and pretty much ignoring the intense balding man ranting next to him next to him. “Where the hell did he get the name Max” In Murphy’s mind every Max was fifty five, overweight, with dark eyebrows threatening to overrun his puffy eyelids and a cigar growing between his mumbling lips. The Max he was rudely staring at was the polar opposite. This Max looked like he slid directly from the ski slope into the living room of the aging apartment on Bridge Street.
Murph’s eyes drifted to the only person he knew in the room. Danny was sitting on the other side of the couch from Max sipping his Corona from the bottle.



message 2: by Dee, Fan of the "Young Prose Society" (new)

Dee Marie (dee_marie) | 3382 comments Mod
Welcome to our writers' world Michael.

Outstanding start to your story. I want to read more :)

*Puts a plate of brownies on your desk*

Wishing you a most wonderful day of writing.

*Dances out of your cubical*


message 3: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 1367 comments welcome michael!


message 4: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments Have fun writing!


message 5: by KM (new)

KM | 12 comments See you around the water cooler.

By the way...did you find where to post your writings? Try looking under your profile.


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