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Poetry Contests > Sixth Poetry Contest September 13th-20th 2012 (CLOSED)

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message 1: by Marissa, BookCrazyDominator! (last edited Sep 13, 2012 07:17PM) (new)

Marissa (crazybooklover97) | 380 comments Mod
Hi ya'll! I will be using a topic suggestion from Taliah!

Topic - DRAGONS

Word Limit - No more then 3,500

Must be PG-13 and no foul language!

Have fun! :D


message 2: by Aria (new)

Aria Ahmer (viramage) | 307 comments Mod
These Broken Wings

These Broken Wings cannot take flight,
My life is shrouded with no light,

Shadows lurk around me,
Haunting, taunting, unmercifully,

I cannot escape,
These Broken Wings are more like a plague,

The fire burning inside,
Is gone and cold,

These Broken Wings are nothing anymore,
These Broken Wings cannot hold off the gore,

Something so suddenly fills my heart,
The smell of sea salt wipes my face,

A wave of warmth takes the colds place,
I open my eyes,

Sunlight strikes my body,
Water is underneath me as I soar,

These Broken Wings,
Are Broken No more,

I am stronger now,
No longer will I hide,

I am a dragon,
A dragon inside,

My fire is pure,
And I am sure,

I will never have these broken wings anymore,
You will not bring me down,

You will not steal my hope,
These wings are healed and ready to float,

I take to the sky,
I can fly,

I open my wings,
I am free,

Free,
The inner dragon is free to fly.

:)


message 3: by Marissa, BookCrazyDominator! (new)

Marissa (crazybooklover97) | 380 comments Mod
Aria N. wrote: "These Broken Wings

These Broken Wings cannot take flight,
My life is shrouded with no light,

Shadows lurk around me,
Haunting, taunting, unmercifully,

I cannot escape,
These Broken Wings are mor..."


Good job Aria :)


message 4: by Marissa, BookCrazyDominator! (last edited Sep 16, 2012 08:03PM) (new)

Marissa (crazybooklover97) | 380 comments Mod
A Lady Who Loves Dragons - By moi! ;) About moi and Aria! ;D

I know a girl who is obsessed with mighty Dragons
Where i'm more of a nerd and into The Lord Of The Rings such as Bilbo Baggins!

She longs to soar like a Dragon with great wings
But I love to make people laugh and TRY to sing

She herself is quite a loon
I cant say anything! I am also a bafoon

She writes about Dragons brave, big, and strong
While I write funny stories and random things like Ping Pong!

Nonetheless we have become pals
We are seriously funny gals!


message 5: by Aria (new)

Aria Ahmer (viramage) | 307 comments Mod
Marissa wrote: "A Lady Who Loves Dragons - By moi! ;) About moi and Aria! ;D

I know a girl who is obsessed with mighty Dragons
Where i'm more of a nerd and into The Lord Of The Rings such as Bilbo Baggins!

She l..."


xD I loved this poem xD


message 6: by Marissa, BookCrazyDominator! (new)

Marissa (crazybooklover97) | 380 comments Mod
Aria N. wrote: "Marissa wrote: "A Lady Who Loves Dragons - By moi! ;) About moi and Aria! ;D

I know a girl who is obsessed with mighty Dragons
Where i'm more of a nerd and into The Lord Of The Rings such as Bilbo..."


"You loved"? PAST TENSE!? XD


message 7: by Aria (last edited Sep 18, 2012 09:20PM) (new)

Aria Ahmer (viramage) | 307 comments Mod
Marissa wrote: "Aria N. wrote: "Marissa wrote: "A Lady Who Loves Dragons - By moi! ;) About moi and Aria! ;D

I know a girl who is obsessed with mighty Dragons
Where i'm more of a nerd and into The Lord Of The Rin..."


You know xD I adored this poem as i read it xD I finished it therefore past tense >:3 or it can be present xD


message 8: by Marissa, BookCrazyDominator! (new)

Marissa (crazybooklover97) | 380 comments Mod
Aria N. wrote: "Marissa wrote: "Aria N. wrote: "Marissa wrote: "A Lady Who Loves Dragons - By moi! ;) About moi and Aria! ;D

I know a girl who is obsessed with mighty Dragons
Where i'm more of a nerd and into The..."


Haha i'm just messing with you XD


message 9: by Aria (new)

Aria Ahmer (viramage) | 307 comments Mod
Marissa wrote: "Aria N. wrote: "Marissa wrote: "Aria N. wrote: "Marissa wrote: "A Lady Who Loves Dragons - By moi! ;) About moi and Aria! ;D

I know a girl who is obsessed with mighty Dragons
Where i'm more of a n..."


You always do! xD


message 10: by Marissa, BookCrazyDominator! (new)

Marissa (crazybooklover97) | 380 comments Mod
Aria N. wrote: "Marissa wrote: "Aria N. wrote: "Marissa wrote: "Aria N. wrote: "Marissa wrote: "A Lady Who Loves Dragons - By moi! ;) About moi and Aria! ;D

I know a girl who is obsessed with mighty Dragons
Where..."


You love it ;D


message 11: by Aria (new)

Aria Ahmer (viramage) | 307 comments Mod
Marissa wrote: "Aria N. wrote: "Marissa wrote: "Aria N. wrote: "Marissa wrote: "Aria N. wrote: "Marissa wrote: "A Lady Who Loves Dragons - By moi! ;) About moi and Aria! ;D

I know a girl who is obsessed with migh..."


MAYBE xD


message 12: by Marissa, BookCrazyDominator! (new)

Marissa (crazybooklover97) | 380 comments Mod
Aria N. wrote: "Marissa wrote: "Aria N. wrote: "Marissa wrote: "Aria N. wrote: "Marissa wrote: "Aria N. wrote: "Marissa wrote: "A Lady Who Loves Dragons - By moi! ;) About moi and Aria! ;D

I know a girl who is ob..."


Haha! XD


message 13: by Marissa, BookCrazyDominator! (new)

Marissa (crazybooklover97) | 380 comments Mod
No one has voted on the poll! VOTE PEOPLE! :D


message 14: by Aria (new)

Aria Ahmer (viramage) | 307 comments Mod
Did you send out an invite with it?


message 15: by Marissa, BookCrazyDominator! (new)

Marissa (crazybooklover97) | 380 comments Mod
Aria N. wrote: "Did you send out an invite with it?"

Yes I did! I always do


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