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message 1: by Kenzie (last edited Feb 04, 2009 01:53PM) (new)

Kenzie Is there something I should change? Something it's missing? Is the style okay? Are the characters 3-dimensional enough?

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I love Daniel's sarcasm!!

message 3: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) i know its hilarious!!!!

message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

One of the lines I have read that I love is: Easy as cheesecake!

message 5: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) i like the one the one with the glass half empty and half full but either way you have a half glass of water

message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

Me too! It's on my quotes!

message 7: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) lool me too

message 8: by Rainy (new)


message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

Rainy-what's a guestion?

message 10: by Rainy (new)


message 11: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) i think she meant

message 12: by [deleted user] (new)

I know. I just do that to Rainy sometimes. I can catch spelling mistakes quite easily!

message 13: by [deleted user] (new)

Like graped!

message 14: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) teehee

message 15: by Rainy (new)


message 16: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) rainy why is everything you are posting in caps lock?

message 17: by [deleted user] (new)

Yes, Rainy, I am still talking about it! So.....HA!

message 18: by Violet (new)

Violet (violetspring) | 16 comments I really LOVE Daniel's charater! He's so funny. Seems like he's one of those charater that's as fun writing them as reading them.

message 19: by Rainy (new)

Rainy he is really funny. i would love to have him in my head, you are so lucky kenzie.

message 20: by [deleted user] (new)

:D Hee hee! I totally agree! I could never create someone like Daniel! Only Kenzie can do that!

message 21: by Rainy (new)

Rainy no duh

message 22: by Violet (new)

Violet (violetspring) | 16 comments Wow, such flatery for Kenzie.

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message 24: by Rainy (new)

Rainy i know, thats me full of flatery

message 25: by Violet (new)

Violet (violetspring) | 16 comments lol

message 26: by Rainy (new)

Rainy :) *blushes*

message 27: by Violet (new)

Violet (violetspring) | 16 comments Okay......

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message 29: by Violet (new)

Violet (violetspring) | 16 comments *walks away slowly*

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message 31: by Kenzie (new)

Kenzie Wow. Okay. Erm. Thanks for all the flattery guys. You're going to give me a big head. LOL

I'm glad you like his character. I've always wanted to write one like him, and now I have. XD It's fun.

message 32: by [deleted user] (new)

I don't understand how you can create the characters that you have created!

message 33: by Kenzie (new)

Kenzie What do you mean?

message 34: by [deleted user] (new)

Well, you give your stories attitude and I give mine dullness!

message 35: by Breezy (last edited Feb 04, 2009 06:32PM) (new)

Breezy | 7 comments Okay...I got on the computer, joined this fabulous little group thinking, "What the heck, why not, I would love to read Kenzie's story..." So I sat down thinking I'd read a couple chapters, see what I thought, you know, not spend much time on it...that was 2 hours 30 minutes ago EXACTLY. Chapter one...chapter 2...mesmerized, I continued reading...Chapter 23 became chapter 34...enraptured, I read on...end of 42. WHAT???? THERE IS NO MORE??? WHY, CRUEL WORLD???
I have one more thing to say, and that is: Bravo, Kenzie. Daniel is a joy (figure of speech) to spend time with. He makes me laugh, he's totally credible and fabulous...I love him. Even though I hate him, I love him, and that's the best kind of character. Bravo, congrats, encore please, encore...write more!!! I'll be keeping close tabs on this one...astounding. That is all I can say.
Oh, and about the getting a big head started a group based as a "fan club" for your writing...and you didn't think people would TOTALLY LOVE IT AND TELL YOU SO??? Crazy girl. :) We could fry eggs on those blushing cheeks of yours-get an ice pack or someone is going to think you have a fever!!!

message 36: by Marie, Biggest supporter (new)

Marie | 14 comments Mod
Kassy have you started to read the story yet???
Im very confused!!!!

message 37: by [deleted user] (new)

Kenzie, I happened to notice that there are some grammar and spelling errors that spell check would not catch.

message 38: by Kenzie (new)

Kenzie Thanks, Breezy! I'm so glad you liked it! Hopefully I'll have more up soon, and I'll let you know when there is more. ☺

I know, Kassy, this is a rough draft, I'm sure I've missed quite a few. If you have any specifics, let me know, then I can fix them beforehand.

message 39: by Kenzie (new)

Kenzie Oh, and sorry about making you spend all that time staring at a computer screen.

message 40: by Marie, Biggest supporter (new)

Marie | 14 comments Mod
hello people answer my question im like really confused!!!!

message 41: by Kenzie (new)

Kenzie She's read 1-15 and 39-40. Tee-hee.

message 42: by Marie, Biggest supporter (new)

Marie | 14 comments Mod

message 43: by Kenzie (new)

Kenzie You asked what she's read, there it is. ☺

message 44: by [deleted user] (new)

Well, I wanted to know what Brann was like and Kenz told me to read the last chapters and I did!

message 45: by Breezy (new)

Breezy | 7 comments Lol-silly people. Yeah, my eyes were just about burning out their sockets with the computer screen glare after spending 2.5 hours with my eyeballs practically glued to the screen...a past time I don't suggest to anyone, particularly if the only glue you have laying around is on the toxic or permanent side...BUT IT WAS WORTH IT! Oh, and if anyone wants something to read while they wait for the next chapter in Reawakened Soul, feel free to stop by mine. (Sorry Kenzie, just taking advantage of a marketing opportunity.) :)

message 46: by Kenzie (new)

Kenzie Tee-hee, that's fine Breezy. I'm sorry you spent all that time with your eyeballs burning. I hope you're okay now.

message 47: by [deleted user] (new)

Get the fire extinguisher!!!!!!!!!!!

message 48: by Kenzie (new)

Kenzie *pulls the extinguisher off the wall* *runs to Breezy* Here, this might help.

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message 50: by Rainy (new)

Rainy :))))))))))) :X i love to smile:)

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