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Critique My Story!!! > What if the legends were true?

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message 1: by Luna (last edited Dec 06, 2012 07:50PM) (new)

Luna Nightwyn (nighwyn) | 2 comments I would really appreciate if people would critique my work in progress. I am actually pretty far in but I would like some feedback.

This story has now available at smashwords and amazon.

Ducky and Kyra just inbox me if you are interested in getting a free copy at Smashwords. :)


Jocelyn (Ducky) (ducky113) | 265 comments It's good, I like it!

message 3: by Kyra (new)

Kyra (Nikara) | 364 comments Mod
I think you have an amazing knack for description and language devices!!! You can really bring the scene to life with the plot and scenery development, and the action keeps you on the edge of your seat with a fast-but-not-too-fast pace. Keep up the great work!!!!!

message 4: by Luna (new)

Luna Nightwyn (nighwyn) | 2 comments Thank you Ducky and Kyra, I been out of it working on other projects for awhile. Unfortunately life distracts you.

Jocelyn (Ducky) (ducky113) | 265 comments *snort* No kidding.

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