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message 1: by J (new)

J (keeponestepahead) | 138 comments I've been trying to pare down my poems into just the necessary bits. My friend Katie said it felt creepy to her, what do you guys think?

“I still keep my baby teeth”

She said and smiled coyly.

Later, I woke to the blue glow of the TV,

Covered her in an heirloom quilt and went to bed.

Inside her night stand, there they were,

Two small teeth in an old pill bottle;

I remember how they rattled.

message 2: by Ruth (new)

Ruth | 5061 comments Doesn't seem creepy at all to me. Just wistful. They grow up so fast, don't they?

message 3: by M (new)

M | 1656 comments I agree with Ruth. Wistful is the impression I get, as well.

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