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Reawakened Soul
So just the next few chapters?
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Okay so Lucifer's setting him up for something?
Cuz I don't know if you've already got that part planned out.
Maybe he could leave, like storm out of the room or something. Then he goes back to Andrea and Trent, and maybe he tells them the truth about him, or they just talk for awhile? I don't know. Maybe they could help him get out of the way of Lucifer.
Or maybe Lucifer gets those four other people to help him get Daniel or something. Idk if that really helps. *scratches head.*
Cuz I don't know if you've already got that part planned out.
Maybe he could leave, like storm out of the room or something. Then he goes back to Andrea and Trent, and maybe he tells them the truth about him, or they just talk for awhile? I don't know. Maybe they could help him get out of the way of Lucifer.
Or maybe Lucifer gets those four other people to help him get Daniel or something. Idk if that really helps. *scratches head.*
Hmm ... well, I know what the next few chapters entail: Daniel finishes his 'talk' with the other Souls, then he goes back to his apartment, talks with Trent for a while, Andrea left her number with him, he calls her up and asks her out for an actual dinner, they go and eat (wow, this date is fun, too). After that I'm stuck. That's where I need help. *sigh*
okay, that makes sense.
Maybe after the date, they hang out a lot more, but maybe something slips from Daniel? Andrea wants to hear more about it . . . oorr they could get in an argument, Daniel's really mad, he's mad at Trent too, because he got in a fight with Andrea so he's mad at the world, then Lucifer shows up, and he practically blows up?
Maybe after the date, they hang out a lot more, but maybe something slips from Daniel? Andrea wants to hear more about it . . . oorr they could get in an argument, Daniel's really mad, he's mad at Trent too, because he got in a fight with Andrea so he's mad at the world, then Lucifer shows up, and he practically blows up?
See, that's what I was thinking, but I don't want them to fight for him to let it slip.I was thinking that Daniel could accidentally let something slip about Lucifer during a date or something, and then Andrea starts asking questions that he doesn't know how to answer.
Andrea goes and talks to Trent about it, who then confronts Daniel. So he starts getting it on both ends, from his girlfriend--at that point she will be--and his best friend, and can't handle it.
Meanwhile, Daniel and the other Reawakened Souls are getting to know each other better, and are at his house. Trent and Andrea decide confront him at his apartment when he's there with the other Souls.
Andrea sees Brann there and immediately thinks Daniel's cheating on her, and Trent is crushed becuase he thinks Daniel's replaced him.
And then it all comes out.
What do you think?
Yeah, I like it. Big gaping moment too.
Because you know, a lot of characters have to have that moment, where everything just sort of slips. XD I like it Kenzie!
Because you know, a lot of characters have to have that moment, where everything just sort of slips. XD I like it Kenzie!
Awesome! Thanks so much for your help!Oh, was there anything you wanted to see in the book that isn't there? I'm always wondering what you guys think should happen.
umm, *thinks*. I don't know really . . . although, I do love the sticky notes.
Oh, at the beginning of your book, Lucifer would show up alot, and assign him people to kill and such, but now as the book goes on, it's like very seldom. So is he going to kill anymore people or not?
Oh, at the beginning of your book, Lucifer would show up alot, and assign him people to kill and such, but now as the book goes on, it's like very seldom. So is he going to kill anymore people or not?
Oh! You're right. He-he. I forgot. Wow, I'm smart. Tee-hee. Yeah, Lucifer can show up sending him on another mission. Sweet! Thank you.Ah, and that will add to his stress. Andrea and Trent harping at him about keeping secrets, the other Souls constantly bugging him to learn things, and get to know him, and then Lucifer sending him to kill people more and more frequently. That would definitely push him over the edge to spill.
yeah . . . glad I could help!
Ur welcome. I can't wait to see how you write it all down. I'm excited. XD
Tee-hee. It'll take a while to write all of it. Actually, Kassy's idea in the other group is starting to formulate into my layout ... Andrea's got to watch her back.
Yeah I was reading what she was saying, I'm not so sure about the whole injury thingy . . . but if it'll work for you go for it!
I think she just want's Daniel to freak out about her safety. *sigh* I dunno. It seems kind of clichic to me to have the girlfriend get injured.
lolz yeah . . . it just kind of seemed like out of the way, because of what we decided here, i don't think it would work out. XD
Yeah. I'm just not sure if this will fit all the space it needs to. I think it will, because I can see where Robby would come in quite nicely. Let's see, if that goes first, and then, yeah, and after that, and then Robby shows up there for dinnner, sees them, and ... ooh! It all works out. Coolio. Thanks, Cali!
wait . . . Robby at dinner=chaos. WOW
Well, Daniel hardly sees him there, and thinks it's a trick of the light. But it's because of him there that causes the ending to happen the way it will.
:) I can't wait to finish it! I love writing it, but I'd really like it finished.
Lolz everyone wants it to be finished. I want to finally get going with W.R.K.R. I'm still not even to the part where I want to be. XD
Join the club. We have matching jackets. XD
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Ooh, I got it. Lucifer asks Daniel to kill ANDREA.
Wait, what ar eyou talking about??????
OH! I forgot that, too. Whoa. Hmmm ... that could work in there ... yeah. Let's see, Lucifer is sending him on more and more killing sprees, and then he gets confronted by the other two. When they find out what he does Andrea freaks out and asks if he still kills people, she refuses to go near him if he's a murderer, he quits. When he does he gets sent to Lucifer's 'adjustment' center, where they try to talk him into being a killer again, which he escapes with the help of the other reawakened souls he's just made friends with ... ooh! Yeah! And then when Lucifer finds out he's gone he goes to find him, and on the way there meets up with ... oh! And he....! OH! Wow, yeah. And then they're there, and Lucifer does that, and Daniel *sniffs*. End of book.WOW! I have it all planned out now. Tee-hee. Sweet.
O.o*skips over last bit so doesnt know what happens*
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Hee hee. I can't WAIT until you write THAT part. *sighs* ah, I LOVE trent. He's such a dork, but that's just Trent...
Although, if Trent were a real person, I would tell him to be a bit less tacky... I mean, c'mon! You just don't do that to your best friend when he's on a date! (sorry if people think that I"m spoiling something.... I'm trying not to say too much...)
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BUT I DON'T WANT IT TO END!!!! NOOOOOO!!! partially because I know the ending, and partially becuase I like it so much!
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He-he-he. Yeah, YOU know what's going to happen on that date. *grins evilly* Gah, I love Trent. XDYeah, I'm trying to put everything in order, so I know how it all meshes together--otherwise I'll forget something (someone!)--when I'm writing it. But I don't want everyone to guess what's going to happen.
Roni's lost it i think . . .
LOL, Roni! Wait 'til you see your shirt! I'm going to try and make the eyes as best as I can for you.Tee-hee. Team Vince. LOL
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Um, let me think.This'll take a while....
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Oh, yeah! Mandy, this girl in my second hour, said she wanted to read it, and then said she was going to make team shirts.
Well, Marie decided she wanted to make them/read the story first, so it's like a race for her. LOL
But they'll be pretty awesome. We're doing the writing in red, I think, and black T-shirts. (Tee-hee. Red and black, the colors I've picked for the story). And it just happens that red is Vince's eye color, so it works!
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Tee-hee. I hope you like it and that you won't wish you hadn't spent the ten bucks or whatever to get the shirt.
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Whooooaaaa.......*eyes get as big as saucers and pop out* Uhhh...wow. Just..wow.
LOL. Sounds amazing!!
But did you Divya's idea, message 30? That's actually a really good idea. Oooh, I know how it could tie in!! What if Lucifer asked Daniel to kill Andrea, and he can't, so he refuses- it could be right after Andrea finds out about him and thinks he's a murderer. So Daniel's already sort of deciding that he's quitting. And the next day Lucifer comes, oblivious, and tells him to kill Andrea. And this is where Daniel goes "NO!"
I have NO idea what to do! Does anyone have any ideas? Anything they want to happen? I'm stressing out here. Gah. Okay, sorry. Um, yeah. Any ideas?