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Inevitable (Harmony, #1)
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So I've had a few days to process and I think I'm ready...
I won't give any spoilers...
This book was WELL WRITTEN... I loved it! The story was good... The characters were well written, and I love the good girl-bad boy, and LOVED the 'little boy'! It had my attention from page one, the first 25% of the book was good reading, but then - WOW!
Talk about sexual tension.... I wanted to find Logan and throw down wherever he was! I kept SEEING him as I read... I loved the man-whore-tease and kept thinking - CASSIE just dive in!!! You did it in the pool! Dive into those eyes... Dive into that walking man-whore-tease and see what happens....!!!!!!!!!
But alas...
She is a stronger woman than I...
When I reached about the 70% mark I couldn't do anything but READ.... it was so good and I really couldn't put it down.. my eyes would blur and water (NOT CRYING!) from overusing them and I would get up for 15 minutes or so and do something - but 15 minutes away was all I could muster and I would be right back at it, flip, flip, flip flipping the pages and then.... BAM....
The door was shut too abruptly for me....
I chucked my iPad on the sofa and got up - stomped around and the hubs asked - What the heck is wrong?
I WAS PI$$ED!
I believe in a good cliff hanger, I try to leave you wanting when I write, because I want you to see it out with me in my books. I want you to WANT to go on the next leg of my journey! But this one didn't make me happy. I felt as though I'd been cheated out of one more segment, scene, SOMETHING before I was left hanging waiting for the next book. And I felt as though it ended so abruptly so that I feel like I HAVE to get the next one - I would rather have WANTED to read the next one...
I was just PI$$ED and I read a lot of reviews on here and see that several others felt like I did...
I WILL read the next book, and I am SURE Ms. Graham knows that because we want to see where the story goes, but.....
If the second book ends in such an abrupt way and there is a third book to follow - I don't know that I would.
Leave me with a morsel of hope... not 'where the heck is the next chapter...'
4.5 HOT - GOOD STORY - WELL WRITTEN stars from me (would have been 5 if the door had shut more gently and hadn't slammed...)
I won't give any spoilers...
This book was WELL WRITTEN... I loved it! The story was good... The characters were well written, and I love the good girl-bad boy, and LOVED the 'little boy'! It had my attention from page one, the first 25% of the book was good reading, but then - WOW!
Talk about sexual tension.... I wanted to find Logan and throw down wherever he was! I kept SEEING him as I read... I loved the man-whore-tease and kept thinking - CASSIE just dive in!!! You did it in the pool! Dive into those eyes... Dive into that walking man-whore-tease and see what happens....!!!!!!!!!
But alas...
She is a stronger woman than I...
When I reached about the 70% mark I couldn't do anything but READ.... it was so good and I really couldn't put it down.. my eyes would blur and water (NOT CRYING!) from overusing them and I would get up for 15 minutes or so and do something - but 15 minutes away was all I could muster and I would be right back at it, flip, flip, flip flipping the pages and then.... BAM....
The door was shut too abruptly for me....
I chucked my iPad on the sofa and got up - stomped around and the hubs asked - What the heck is wrong?
I WAS PI$$ED!
I believe in a good cliff hanger, I try to leave you wanting when I write, because I want you to see it out with me in my books. I want you to WANT to go on the next leg of my journey! But this one didn't make me happy. I felt as though I'd been cheated out of one more segment, scene, SOMETHING before I was left hanging waiting for the next book. And I felt as though it ended so abruptly so that I feel like I HAVE to get the next one - I would rather have WANTED to read the next one...
I was just PI$$ED and I read a lot of reviews on here and see that several others felt like I did...
I WILL read the next book, and I am SURE Ms. Graham knows that because we want to see where the story goes, but.....
If the second book ends in such an abrupt way and there is a third book to follow - I don't know that I would.
Leave me with a morsel of hope... not 'where the heck is the next chapter...'
4.5 HOT - GOOD STORY - WELL WRITTEN stars from me (would have been 5 if the door had shut more gently and hadn't slammed...)
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Reading Progress
June 18, 2013
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Started Reading
June 18, 2013
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June 23, 2013
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100.0%
"I spent all day reading.... like I'm blind can't see reading because it was so good and then just WOW...\n I have to think how to put my thoughts into words to finish a review...."
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320
June 23, 2013
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100.0%
"I spent all day reading.... like I'm blind can't see reading because I couldn't put it down, it was so good and then just WOW...\n I have to think how to put my thoughts into words to finish a review...."
page
320
June 23, 2013
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Finished Reading
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Jun 26, 2013 08:35PM
Hi Barbara! I know the ending is not a favorite:( but I swear I'm working hard on the next book and have 2 teasers up on my facebook author page:) I am so happy you enjoyed my first book and that you liked Logan and connected with the characters! That is a huge compliment as a writer as it sounds like you know that:) Book 2 will be out October 1st and I can assure you there will be know cliffhanger and no third book:) Thanks for a wonderful review that I actually read twice! You're the best:) ~Angela
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