Amanda Gill's Reviews > Winter's Storm: Retribution
Winter's Storm: Retribution (Winter's Saga, #2)
Amanda Gill's review
May 02, 2013
I wanted to like this book as much as the first one, but it is so poorly edited that I couldn't even finish the book. Wrong word choices (whole instead of hole...how do you punch a whole in someone's neck?), changing verb tenses mid-sentence, incorrect pronouns, and so many other silly mistakes made the book nearly unreadable for me. I think that's sad because the story concept is excellent! I like the characters and their adventures. I want to know what's going to happen to them. Unfortunately, the delivery of the story leaves a lot to be desired. I really think the solution is finding a better editor.
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May 2, 2013 – Shelved