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Brushed by Stal Lionne
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BRUSHED is an erotic short about a lonely housewife searching for a little sexual release and since her husband isn’t willing to give it to her, she searches elsewhere. What begins as a stroll in the city turns into a passionate fantasy come true!

Short stories are tough. It is difficult to properly develop the characters and plot enough to leave the reader feeling fulfilled. I have suggested to the author that he “beef up” the story to make it a bit longer. BRUSHED is more like a “scene” than a story, so, as the story stands, it is a 2 star read for me. If the story were expanded, I would definitely consider re-reading it and editing my review to reflect my feelings on the new content.

Oh and P.S. Stal - LOVE the new cover. Totally HOT!

✳✳ Copy provided by the author/publisher for an honest review.

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message 1: by Vicki (new)

Vicki Nice honest review, Bookie. I agree with you on short stories.


I ♥ Bookie Nookie (bookienookiereviews.blogspot.com) Yes, it is so tough to really pull the reader in a short story - this story definitely has potential with some plot and character development :-)

Thanks for the comment!


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