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Pulled by Danielle Bannister
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Pulled had a unique story line that had me intrigued and sucked me right in. I prayed really hard on the last page.

From a story perspective, Pulled was an excellent one. I am compelled to Google "twin flame"s and see if it's actually a part of mythology. I took a mythology class but we never discussed that topic. I love books that introduce me to new things, and I adore stories that leave me room to fill in the blanks with my own imagination. The main characters were nicely fleshed out.

From an editor's perspective, I'd like to see the use of more contractions in the writing and fewer repeated words in sentences. I found myself editing the text as I read. When Ms. Bannister was writing emotional scenes, her writing was flawless and progressed smoothly. Transitions were well done.

I could have done without the epilogue if there's to be a sequel. I'd like to have been left wondering. It gave me too much.

All in all, a book I would recommend reading.

Finally, my rating:
3 out of 5 stars

+1 for a great story that made me think and desire to Google
+1 for excellent flow and transitions
+1 for characters I fell in love with
-1 for need of one more round of edits
-1 for epilogue
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Reading Progress

October 5, 2012 – Started Reading
October 5, 2012 – Shelved
October 5, 2012 –
page 50
20.49% "Great story. Paperback read so carrying everywhere :)"
October 5, 2012 – Finished Reading
October 6, 2012 –
100.0% "Review to come!!"

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