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Stumbling Into Forever by Molly O'Hare
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it was ok


So, I read the 1st book in the series and (while aspects of both the h/H were annoying, and some of the vocabulary and wording was both repetitively irritating and overkill, it was cute enough and decently written enough to move to book 2. Big mistake. Ben and the bubble wrap jokes are as overdone as Holly/Grace's cookies. And the "prank" he thought it was a good idea to pull...prank by traffic stop seems to either be the height of white lady entitled stupidity or it didnt age well (not sure when this was written). Add to this the total disrespect and condescension/ patronizing attitude of all the men to what is an incredibly immature and rediculously unrealistic caricature of a hot mess (not even a lovably absentminded sweetie or quirky but adorable clitz...no, Holly/Grace bobbles between rabid bitch and vapid idiot). The story could have been cute...but between the terribly repetitive description of action (wiggling your butt for sex is not sexy the 1st time, and it becames less so everytime thereafter) and the unfortunate characteristization of the h/H, the only thing rhat saves it are the stupidly spoiled dogs and the adorably twitchy cat.

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July 23, 2021 – Shelved
July 23, 2021 – Finished Reading

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