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The Burning Star by Jessie Lane
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Jul 21, 2012

it was ok
bookshelves: indie-author
Read in July, 2012

Thank you to the author(s) who provided a copy of this e-book in exchange for a fair review.

I wanted to love this, I really did but I had some issues with it. I will say that I loved the cover! It's beautiful and unique and what originally caught my eye. The story itself was an interesting one but there are quite a few technical errors with it; grammar mistakes and paragraphs that basically repeat what's just been said. The switching back and forth between first and third person was confusing too, especially when it takes place in the same paragraph. I found myself thinking that what this book needs is a little more proofreading and editing. Clean it up a bit and it will be really good!
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