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Forced Training by combatcrazy
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bookshelves: mm, mission-aborted

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message 1: by ElaineY (new) - added it

ElaineY This started off promising but on the next few pages it disintegrated. First, I couldn't buy into the rationale for turning Tony into a slave rather than putting him into Witsec, as Gibbs pointed out.

Then, even though I decided to let that go, the writing became overly sweet and sentimental. This is not the Gibbs I have in mind, nor is it the Gibbs that's usually portrayed - hard, cold exterior hiding a tortured soul, needing to love and protect but scared witless at the same time. Gibbs has to hide his feeling and it should take time to draw them out.

Gibbs fell apart within a few pages! What a travesty. Can't continue:(


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