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The Deathless Girls
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bookshelves: sapphic, lgbt, vampires, ya-lit, retellings-or-adaptations, non-white-characters, romani-characters, 1-star, historical-fiction, paranormal-horror, uk-and-ireland
Feb 06, 2020
bookshelves: sapphic, lgbt, vampires, ya-lit, retellings-or-adaptations, non-white-characters, romani-characters, 1-star, historical-fiction, paranormal-horror, uk-and-ireland
Rep: Romani wlw mc, Romani characters
CWs: murder, violence, implied sexual harrassment, attempted sexual assault
• oh god can we talk how badly the author researched Romanian - using a plural form in place of a singular, using a singular form in place of a plural, MAKING UP a singular form for a word, getting the plural form of a word wrong, using a definite noun where an indefinite one is needed, deciding randomly to show that she knows how Romanian definite articles work only to go back to using "the [noun]" three pages later - and not to mention the randomness of chucking a few Romanian nouns in when they are IN ROMANIA, they are SPEAKING ROMANIAN, and then ITALICISING THEM (also side note, there are definitely typefaces that can deal with ţ and ş and ă without making them seem like monster letters)
• the translations are all ever so slightly off, like they're sort of in the right ballpark, but missing the nuances that the words have (listen, if you can, wordreference >>>>> google translate, and for romanian in particular, vocabular.ro is always useful)
• the author's note seems to imply that KMH decided to write Romani characters because her family was from northern India & Romani people originated from there, so yeah. okay.
CWs: murder, violence, implied sexual harrassment, attempted sexual assault
• oh god can we talk how badly the author researched Romanian - using a plural form in place of a singular, using a singular form in place of a plural, MAKING UP a singular form for a word, getting the plural form of a word wrong, using a definite noun where an indefinite one is needed, deciding randomly to show that she knows how Romanian definite articles work only to go back to using "the [noun]" three pages later - and not to mention the randomness of chucking a few Romanian nouns in when they are IN ROMANIA, they are SPEAKING ROMANIAN, and then ITALICISING THEM (also side note, there are definitely typefaces that can deal with ţ and ş and ă without making them seem like monster letters)
• the translations are all ever so slightly off, like they're sort of in the right ballpark, but missing the nuances that the words have (listen, if you can, wordreference >>>>> google translate, and for romanian in particular, vocabular.ro is always useful)
• the author's note seems to imply that KMH decided to write Romani characters because her family was from northern India & Romani people originated from there, so yeah. okay.
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Reading Progress
September 10, 2019
– Shelved
September 10, 2019
– Shelved as:
to-read-unpublished
September 10, 2019
– Shelved as:
sapphic
September 10, 2019
– Shelved as:
lgbt
September 10, 2019
– Shelved as:
vampires
September 10, 2019
– Shelved as:
ya-lit
October 2, 2019
– Shelved as:
to-read
December 29, 2019
– Shelved as:
retellings-or-adaptations
January 27, 2020
– Shelved as:
up-next
February 5, 2020
–
Started Reading
February 5, 2020
–
3.95%
"they could have at least picked a typeface that doesn't treat ă like some kind of monster letter"
page
12
February 6, 2020
–
11.51%
"circled every instance of this book getting the romanian wrong so far and.....there's a lot"
page
35
February 6, 2020
– Shelved as:
non-white-characters
February 6, 2020
– Shelved as:
romani-characters
February 6, 2020
–
67.43%
"kmh: [proves she has some idea of how romanian definite articles work]
kmh: [persists in getting it wrong still]"
page
205
kmh: [persists in getting it wrong still]"
February 6, 2020
– Shelved as:
1-star
February 6, 2020
–
Finished Reading
July 24, 2020
– Shelved as:
historical-fiction
July 24, 2020
– Shelved as:
paranormal-horror
September 21, 2020
– Shelved as:
uk-and-ireland
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