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Love Undercover by Larry  Johnson
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Mar 10, 2012

did not like it
bookshelves: 2012, books-sent-by-author-publisher-for
Read from March 10 to April 11, 2012

I cannot recommend this book to anyone, or maybe it just wasn’t my thing.

Review: Another book that really floored me. I hate to review books I didn’t like. I don’t want to be the one to crush an authors dream, but this book needs an editor-or a better one than it had. The story line could have been written much more interesting and in much more details. This was like reading an outline not a complete story. So much happens with little explanation why and so many different things are going on at the same time. Not to mention the stilted dialogue. Finishing this book became a challenge and I plowed through a few pages a day to do so.

There is an interesting story(I imagine) behind all the…stuff…but it is lost because of the writing and the way the story is rushed through. The end on the other hand is ridiculous and LOL really. I was disappointed by this book and feel like I wasted my time. I really don’t understand how this got published to begin with….I’ve looked at the Tate website and if this is the caliber of writing they accept then reviewing for Tate again will take lots of convincing. Which is sad because I reviewed Losing Michal Malone(from Tate) and that was an amazing book.

Spolier: When I fall in love the thing I usually do is try to kill that person. What? So confused by this book.

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03/21/2012 page 50
23.0% "The writing is confusing."
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