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Forsaken by Jamie Craig
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Feb 28, 2012

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bookshelves: free-read, m-m, m-m-mystery
Read on February 28, 2012

This is a story about two detectives who used to live together but broke up several years ago. Detective Xavier Landis finds a dead body that has a note addressed to Jeff Keyes. Xavier has never gotten over his feelings for Jeff & feels the need to protect him. They decide to team up to find the killer.

I liked the two characters but Jeff really didn't give a real strong reason why he broke up with Xavier. It was left for us to assume it was because Jeff was in the closet, even though Jeff continued to see men after the break up. I think the story needed to spell it out more because it made Jeff seem like a weak character as he never once tried to contact Xavier after their break up but falls back way too easily into a relationship after their accidental meeting.

The murder mystery also didn't turn out to be that interesting. But I still liked the writing style & enjoyed reading this little free online story.
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