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Witchful Thinking by H.P. Mallory
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Feb 27, 2012

it was ok
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Read from February 28 to March 01, 2012

I gave this book 3 stars last night, but upon waking the next day and thinking about this book, I decided to give it 2 stars (maybe even 1), because I'm irritated by most of the book, but mainly the ending. Reasons why?:

1. Half of the book is talking about the other 2.5 books. Yawn. Dear Author, I read your series, and I get the hints, innuendos, and I don't need Jolie's diary to spell out the plot for me. I felt like instead of rehashing what I already knew, you could have given us more info about Mercedes, Sinjin, and maybe progressed more with Rand, but no we get to relive the other books, then the last few chapters you drop big things on our lap and then don't even deal with them, but present a COMPLETE different direction for this series for the ending part of this book. I feel like this book could have added more insight to the characters, but instead made me have MORE questions about them, particularly Sinjin and Mercedes.

2. Throw us a damn bone with Rand and Jolie's relationship!! Jesus, their relationship is so hot and cold and it feels like once they are progressing, something happens and then it's back to square one again. I'm starting to look at them as the annoying couple that always break up, but end up back together. I'm also feeling like your doing this to your readers because you regret making Rand the main man of Jolie and trying to convince us that Sinjin is a better fit.

3. WHY IS SINJIN EVEN A RUNNER UP???!!! *NOT a fan of Sinjin* I'm getting sick of the love triangle.

I want to see what happens with this series, but I don't appreciate being jerked around so the author can squeeze out more books. I'm really fighting with myself, if I even care to find out what happens with the 4th book. We'll see in July...
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