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Stolen by Merrill Gemus
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Jan 28, 2012

it was ok
Read from January 28 to 29, 2012

continues basically where the first book (Bitten) left off, but what a difference in writing. This one was like a high school kid wrote it. The tenses were off in the same sentence, and constantly in the same paragraph the character was refered to as Ben & Benedict, yet in the first book he was always referred to as Benedict other then when she called him Ben once or twice. The writing was haphazard and made for start & stop reading. Really like the story and again it was too short. Wish that book 1 & 2 were part of one regular size (300 pages or so) book. I look forward to the next book because the overall story has potential & so far so good for it, hopefully the editing is done on the next book. If the editing had been done better I would have given this book a 3 1/2 to 4 stars. It was more about Gabe & less about Benedict, but since the book is so short I looked at it as a few chapters in the story and that these chapters were about finding Ally, which Gabe does.
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