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The Unwanted by Steam Punk
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it was ok

For a give away short story one maybe shouldn't complain, but it takes time to read stories and i feel this was a waste of it.

We are given characters who were raised and trained from childhood to fulfil their adult roles, who are apparently the best at what they do, but who then come across as incredibly flawed and weak.

Then there's the editing, seriously, did someone just type this down and run it through a spell checker before publishing it?

I do feel there's a good story hiding behind the faults, which kind of adds to the annoyance.

Ho hum...
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Reading Progress

September 12, 2018 – Started Reading
September 12, 2018 – Shelved
September 13, 2018 – Finished Reading

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