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The Invitation by Diane Hoh
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Dec 26, 2011

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bookshelves: cheese, horror, young-adult, library

I’m all for the re-emergence of cheese and Open Road Media has a market for that. They’ve been re-releasing older YA titles as of late and, knowing me, I’m pretty quick to gobble them up. They usually end up being short reads, concise and to the point without much depth to them. Lead-up to mystery, solve it, story ends and that’s pretty much it. THE INVITATION didn’t let me down in this regard.

The issues that I generally have with these titles is that the characters are a bit too stereotypical and they’re written so that they portray teens to how adults feel they are. The mean girls fit nicely into a little box and a character’s brattiness is usually running a bit higher than what it probably should be. What makes that last part worse is that the story doesn’t delve too deeply into the character’s head so the personality isn’t explained away or as a reader you do know what’s going on but it’s usually pretty petty. The antagonists in THE INVITATION fit this moniker. They’re one dimensional and stereotypical, one being the mean girl to an extreme and the other being a straight up crazy bitch. If this were in any other recent YA horror I’d scoff at it. But cheese gets a pass. Because it’s cheese.

The cast of protagonist characters is pretty large but they fit their own molds just like the villains with a couple that probably could have been removed entirely and the story would have been none the wiser. The characters with the most emphasis, Ellie, Sarah and Shane were of course the stand-out characters, except Ellie ended up fading into the background towards the end. I would have liked to have seen her stand up a little more, break out of her self-deprecating shell a little more but it is what it is. Riley, Sarah’s love interest, played a bit part and love was had at the end. Because it needed to end on an up note.

The biggest issue I had with THE INVITATION was the sex of the major antagonist. Once that person was introduced I went whole chapters without knowing what the sex of the villain was, despite the character actually being present on the page. Initially it was male just with a feminine name, Leslie (right up there with Shannon and Kim as male names, ugh). Even in the flashback Leslie was still androgynous. I couldn’t place the sex. I got so confused that I had to flip back earlier to see if I missed something, some tell-tale sign that this person was male or female. Nope. It started off male and ended female. I know it’s an uncorrected proof but that’s pretty major. It was halfway explained by a confusion of people but even after that it still didn’t make sense, especially with how the story was unfolding. I’d have to call that sloppy.

Overall it wasn’t as big of a fright as I would have liked. Cass was far creepier doing what she did to the outcast group of kids she invited than the real antagonist was simply because she was so heartless. I would have liked that route better than the crazy person at the end. Not my favorite cheese read but it sits nicely in the cockles. I’ll take it.

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Reading Progress

December 26, 2011 – Shelved
December 26, 2011 – Shelved as: cheese
February 22, 2012 – Started Reading
February 27, 2012 –
page 65
February 28, 2012 –
page 204
100% "I'm confused. Where does the costume jewelry come into play? At first Shane made it seem like her boyfriend gave her a stolen ring. Now they're both complicit?"
February 28, 2012 –
page 217
100% "I thought so. Lynn Loonies started off as a male football player and has now morphed into a female friend. I get this is an uncorrected proof but holy god…"
February 28, 2012 – Finished Reading
December 24, 2013 – Shelved as: horror
December 24, 2013 – Shelved as: young-adult
November 23, 2014 – Shelved as: library

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message 1: by Sarah Mac (new)

Sarah Mac Oooh! Isn't this one of the ones I mailed you? :D

Donna Yes it is! Plus Open Road Media is re-releasing it so it's filled with super cheese glory!

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