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Renovator by Bill Riddell
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Dec 12, 2011

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bookshelves: contemporary, ebook, kindle, short-story

Short story.

A little strange, it goes from these two people being interested in each other, to where they can't stand each other in a blink of an eye. I know it's a short story, but I wish there would have been a progression from point A to point Z. That's my only complaint and thus the lower rating. Adding another 10 + pages would still have categorized this as a short story but may have added to it overall.
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Reading Progress

December 12, 2011 – Shelved
December 15, 2011 – Started Reading
December 15, 2011 – Finished Reading
December 17, 2011 – Shelved as: contemporary
December 17, 2011 – Shelved as: ebook
December 17, 2011 – Shelved as: kindle
December 17, 2011 – Shelved as: short-story

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Bill Thanks so much for your review Carolyn, I really appreciate the feedback.
In hindsight I agree, the escalation is so sudden and regardless of the main characters obsession does not ring true. That short coming aside I hope you enjoyed the little tale.
Happy reading,
Bill


Carolyn F. I think expansion would have added to the short story. I appreciate the free read. If you do add to it later, I'll re-read it.


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