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If You Give A Girl A Viscount by Kieran Kramer
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Oct 30, 2011

did not like it
bookshelves: genre-romance-historical, classified-as-dnf

# Pages Survived: 161

This book sucked ass. I admit it- said novel more than surpassed the 60 page benchmark, tripled it, in fact. But, still, the book was god-awful. The characters weren't bland, the story-line wasn't lacking, and the plot was interesting enough. Ironically, what killed this particular book mid-story, for me, was the writing. For some unknown reason, Kieran Kramer's style seemed to read more along the lines of a high school senior attempting to write her first fiction piece for an English portfolio.

Additionally, I likewise found myself sometimes cringing at the syntax used by nearly all characters involved, but most especially the heroine. To my eyes, the female protagonist came off as a modern woman plucked from the present, and dropped into the era. Her role as tormented "Cinderella" swish-swashed from abused, meekly quiet gal to head-strong smart mouth, all within an entirely too short a time span.

Sadly, upon finishing (or not finishing, as the case is) this particular novel, I do realize that I still have another Kramer book in my stash. Since I didn't hate this book enough to ban the author from my reading list completely, I will give the writer one more chance. If the next book bombs for the same reason, I'm chucking said book to the nearest wall, PDQ.
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Reading Progress

October 30, 2011 – Shelved
February 20, 2012 – Started Reading
February 24, 2012 – Finished Reading
April 23, 2012 – Shelved as: genre-romance-historical
April 23, 2012 – Shelved as: classified-as-dnf

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